for Just Smile and Nod5/26/2017 c36 Tlotliso
Type your review story plz do continue
Type your review story plz do continue
5/13/2017 c36 PassionateStylus
Good morning!
So, here's the thing. I just finished pulling an all nighter for this story - something I rarely ever do. Because of this fact alone, you should be congratulating yourself right now. Your story is definitely a new perspective that I don't think is often - if ever, explored. Since I noticed you bringing it up often in your notes, I'm going to ask a friend to take a look into reviewing your chapters for you. Please keep in mind that she is very honest with her opinions and dedicates a lot of time to any piece of text she reviews. I'll have her send you a PM over the next week to confirm if that's okay should she be interested (which I suspect she'll have a hard time not being). Anyways, I'm going to leave now, seeing as I'm exhausted. Good luck with finding your writer's groove again, because I am definitely eagerly awaiting the next update.
Thank you for the entertainment.
Good morning!
So, here's the thing. I just finished pulling an all nighter for this story - something I rarely ever do. Because of this fact alone, you should be congratulating yourself right now. Your story is definitely a new perspective that I don't think is often - if ever, explored. Since I noticed you bringing it up often in your notes, I'm going to ask a friend to take a look into reviewing your chapters for you. Please keep in mind that she is very honest with her opinions and dedicates a lot of time to any piece of text she reviews. I'll have her send you a PM over the next week to confirm if that's okay should she be interested (which I suspect she'll have a hard time not being). Anyways, I'm going to leave now, seeing as I'm exhausted. Good luck with finding your writer's groove again, because I am definitely eagerly awaiting the next update.
Thank you for the entertainment.
4/8/2017 c36 A
Hey where are you? Are you okay ?
Hey where are you? Are you okay ?
4/1/2017 c36 Acie
I believe in you author! I know you can do it! Despite your amazingly busy life you will still update for us!
(Yes I am very persuasive)
(Please update before I for from suspense...)
(I don't know what I'm doing anymore)
I believe in you author! I know you can do it! Despite your amazingly busy life you will still update for us!
(Yes I am very persuasive)
(Please update before I for from suspense...)
(I don't know what I'm doing anymore)
3/27/2017 c1 codingismylife
Wow. Truly a masterpiece.
Wow. Truly a masterpiece.
3/27/2017 c36 
7MorganaLeFay678
Ok ok, so you're probably gonna pay no attention to this, but please update! This story is amazing, and I love all the characters and all the twists in the plot. Let me tell you: this story has made me feel a lot, and that doesn't usually happen. This is so amazing! (Please update, I need to know what happens!)
7MorganaLeFay678Ok ok, so you're probably gonna pay no attention to this, but please update! This story is amazing, and I love all the characters and all the twists in the plot. Let me tell you: this story has made me feel a lot, and that doesn't usually happen. This is so amazing! (Please update, I need to know what happens!)
1/16/2017 c1 Guest
Greatest story ever! Plzzz update soon!
Greatest story ever! Plzzz update soon!
12/16/2016 c36 A
This is a major cliffhanger . Please update :-)
This is a major cliffhanger . Please update :-)
12/13/2016 c36 2BlackHeron104
I. Am. In. Love. With. This. Story.
You managed to write this entire story cliche-free, with no cringiness stories usually have when their characters suffer some sort of trauma. You made it so much real-er, and I feel like I've just woken up from a dream...
This story is really incredible, the plot line is beautiful, and unlike normal cliche stories where you can easily predict what will happen next, the story has all these unpredictable twists and curves.
I look forward to your next chapter! You've got me waiting.
2BlackHeron104I. Am. In. Love. With. This. Story.
You managed to write this entire story cliche-free, with no cringiness stories usually have when their characters suffer some sort of trauma. You made it so much real-er, and I feel like I've just woken up from a dream...
This story is really incredible, the plot line is beautiful, and unlike normal cliche stories where you can easily predict what will happen next, the story has all these unpredictable twists and curves.
I look forward to your next chapter! You've got me waiting.
11/24/2016 c36 A
This chapter was really nice. And I love how you've got us readers to this point where we have started Toole Hayden. I remember thinking how much I don't like Hayden nor trust him in your initial chapters. But at some point I had a change in my thoughts about him. I can't wait for the next chapter ! :)
Eagerly waiting !:)
This chapter was really nice. And I love how you've got us readers to this point where we have started Toole Hayden. I remember thinking how much I don't like Hayden nor trust him in your initial chapters. But at some point I had a change in my thoughts about him. I can't wait for the next chapter ! :)
Eagerly waiting !:)
10/19/2016 c36 5RebekahFyre
I'm an addict... and this is my crack. I saw that there was a new chapter so I reread the entire thing... for the fourth time? Heh...
I freaking love it!
Anyway, I did notice that in either this chapter or the chapter before you got the art teachers name wrong. Or changed it and didn't change the rest. I had other noticings as I read, but I can't remember them at the moment... oh yeah! She said he made a promise. About their relationship? I wasn't sure to what she was referring. Not to kiss her again? I don't remember reading about it.
Keep writing! Don't stop! I want to see it all. Whether Alys can handle the unveiling, if she breaks again, if her dad shows up, if Hayden takes the fall he thinks he will, where their relationship goes, how Karri fits in... I want more. Please.
5RebekahFyreI'm an addict... and this is my crack. I saw that there was a new chapter so I reread the entire thing... for the fourth time? Heh...
I freaking love it!
Anyway, I did notice that in either this chapter or the chapter before you got the art teachers name wrong. Or changed it and didn't change the rest. I had other noticings as I read, but I can't remember them at the moment... oh yeah! She said he made a promise. About their relationship? I wasn't sure to what she was referring. Not to kiss her again? I don't remember reading about it.
Keep writing! Don't stop! I want to see it all. Whether Alys can handle the unveiling, if she breaks again, if her dad shows up, if Hayden takes the fall he thinks he will, where their relationship goes, how Karri fits in... I want more. Please.
10/14/2016 c36 Jia
Omg
What are you doing!?
Loved it!
Soo happy to have you back. I hope all gets right in your life soon. This is beautiful. Its tough waiting. Try updating soon. Love you loads. I want a Hayden for me. Looking forward to how alys shows Hayden his true self :D
Omg
What are you doing!?
Loved it!
Soo happy to have you back. I hope all gets right in your life soon. This is beautiful. Its tough waiting. Try updating soon. Love you loads. I want a Hayden for me. Looking forward to how alys shows Hayden his true self :D
10/8/2016 c36 Starlings
I've been waiting soooo long for an update! Loved it! This tory has completely captivated me and I can't wait for the next update!. Also, Alys is a badass.
I've been waiting soooo long for an update! Loved it! This tory has completely captivated me and I can't wait for the next update!. Also, Alys is a badass.
10/8/2016 c36 TicoTaco
Omg I missed this story so much but I totally respect that you've been busy with your life.
Congratulations girl on you marriage ! And may your following years bring you both happinnes !
I just love how Hayden is around Alys and the gentle side that shows and we know its genuine.
Honestly what I love most is how realistic this story is the world isn't sunshine and rainbows.
Omg I missed this story so much but I totally respect that you've been busy with your life.
Congratulations girl on you marriage ! And may your following years bring you both happinnes !
I just love how Hayden is around Alys and the gentle side that shows and we know its genuine.
Honestly what I love most is how realistic this story is the world isn't sunshine and rainbows.
10/8/2016 c36 KarasunoFan
I enjoyed the chapter. It didn't feel rushed, but I felt like I was caught up in a whirlwind. Very engaging.
I enjoyed the chapter. It didn't feel rushed, but I felt like I was caught up in a whirlwind. Very engaging.