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this is really good
i like the way you write
;D
please please please update soon
this is really good
i like the way you write
;D
please please please update soon
6/10/2010 c1 
4jessnutsss
I haven't been in FP in ages and tonight, I decided I want to read something that would make me believe again. I chose your story and guess what, it did not disappoint. I'm hoping you'll update soon.
xx Jess
4jessnutsssI haven't been in FP in ages and tonight, I decided I want to read something that would make me believe again. I chose your story and guess what, it did not disappoint. I'm hoping you'll update soon.
xx Jess
4/4/2010 c1 emmargh
looks like itll be really good! if you need someone to review for you just reply at the end of the next chapter. thanks for the read! x
looks like itll be really good! if you need someone to review for you just reply at the end of the next chapter. thanks for the read! x
1/21/2010 c1 fluffhy
This is good, can't wait til next ch!
Hurry up. P.S I know a song with the name Welcome to my life. Good song : )
This is good, can't wait til next ch!
Hurry up. P.S I know a song with the name Welcome to my life. Good song : )
1/14/2010 c1 2Its.Not.Me.Its.You
I LOVE this prolog
its amazing but there were two small grammer typos
i don't know if you want to know that or not some authors like that
please update soon!
i cant wait for more!
hope everythings going well for you
-ifly*hugs*
2Its.Not.Me.Its.YouI LOVE this prolog
its amazing but there were two small grammer typos
i don't know if you want to know that or not some authors like that
please update soon!
i cant wait for more!
hope everythings going well for you
-ifly*hugs*
1/13/2010 c1 11Liveey123348
Lol Great story line! I love drawing too! YAYY
I cannot wait till the next chapter!
KAITLYN
11Liveey123348Lol Great story line! I love drawing too! YAYY
I cannot wait till the next chapter!
KAITLYN
1/13/2010 c1 xximinluvxx
Oh! This sounds really really really really really really good! ^_^ keep going :D
Is there anything in particular you would like me to comment on? I'm planning on following this story :)
Oh! This sounds really really really really really really good! ^_^ keep going :D
Is there anything in particular you would like me to comment on? I'm planning on following this story :)
1/13/2010 c1 larathiel
Nice start. Just check the spelling and other typos. Other than that I like it. I've been to a high school exactly like that so I think your depiction is marvelous. Keep it up!
Nice start. Just check the spelling and other typos. Other than that I like it. I've been to a high school exactly like that so I think your depiction is marvelous. Keep it up!
1/13/2010 c1 3Megsi
I like the sound of this. You have a promising prologue that makes me want to read more and I like the touch of adding gossip about the other students; You get a feel for the school and what it's students are like and you can tell that she is very observant and kind of invisisble? In the sense that she does not seem to belong to any of the cliched groups she mentioned.
You had a few minor grammatical errors such as:
'My hair had tumbled off my shoulder and it lied on the edges of my paper'
It should be 'lay' not 'lied.' And possibly change 'edges' to 'edge,' the singular use seems to make more sense to me...
But otherwise, good job and I can't wait to read more :)
3MegsiI like the sound of this. You have a promising prologue that makes me want to read more and I like the touch of adding gossip about the other students; You get a feel for the school and what it's students are like and you can tell that she is very observant and kind of invisisble? In the sense that she does not seem to belong to any of the cliched groups she mentioned.
You had a few minor grammatical errors such as:
'My hair had tumbled off my shoulder and it lied on the edges of my paper'
It should be 'lay' not 'lied.' And possibly change 'edges' to 'edge,' the singular use seems to make more sense to me...
But otherwise, good job and I can't wait to read more :)
1/13/2010 c1 ie8
Hey! I like the idea of this story, and this chapter was pretty good (: Hope you can give us more info about the main character herself in the next chapter...
Keep up the good work!
Hey! I like the idea of this story, and this chapter was pretty good (: Hope you can give us more info about the main character herself in the next chapter...
Keep up the good work!