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12/5/2010 c9 Nadinerdrgz
I like you story its very good I was wondering if you can check out my first story i did let me know what you think
10/16/2010 c9 Forever123
okay, this story is fantastic! I love it!

Please update soon! :)
8/21/2010 c9 RoxyHeart
Finally! could you have taken much longer to update? :P

But i loved it! i love Beck with his growly voice and i love how beck and maddie well comfortable together but have the twins been swapping is that why Beck acts so different?


8/9/2010 c9 xsaralynvioletx
Wow Beck and Maddie are actual not being uncomfortable around each other. Shockin Glad to see you updated! UPDATE SOON! :D
8/9/2010 c9 ACKLAX3
great chapter! i was excited for the update, can't wait for more:)
8/9/2010 c9 3Medusa's.Protege
Ok, I don't get it! I thought this whole story was about her getting revenge at Alex and fall in love with beck,, not accidently sleeping with bec and date Alex, then fal in love with bec, -or his twin- I'm so confused!
8/9/2010 c9 ilovepunks
this was goodd(:

quite rushed, but not rushed if you get what i mean:D

alex is annoying;]

but, its quite complicating, how beck randomly has a cousin, and how i just ended up drunk off wkd. ;D


6/3/2010 c8 Thing 1 and Thing 2

okay so we love the characters and everything, but

they're not really doing anything

they're like "hey i hate you" and then the next day its like "hey i love you."

and we're like, "What the hell?"

don't get us wrong, we love your story, but we're thoroughly and continuously confused whenever we read this story.

One second Beck likes Maddy or atleast enough to crawl on top of her, and then he's checkin out adriannas legs, THEN the next day he's all bumbed cuz hes all alone.

but maybe that's how you want to write your story(: just a way to keep us interested and on our toes(:

awesome chapter

update soon


Thing 1 and Thing 2(:
5/28/2010 c8 Medusa's.Protege
O my gosh! AVATAR and Forever21 in the same chapter!

You are amazing!
5/28/2010 c8 ACKLAX3
haha i loved this chapter! aww poor beck-he seemed kinda upset;) cant wait for more!
5/28/2010 c8 xsaralynvioletx
Poor Beck, he's so alone. Glad to see an update! :]
5/28/2010 c8 RoxyHeart
heyy :)

alex was so cute as the protective over brother and the 'stupid blue haired motherfucker' made me laugh :)

I feel sorry for Beck but i really hope he doesn't tell Alex that him and Maddie that they slept together.

I love the outfits again aha :) and when we meet our tommy sullivan's we'll have to double date :)

5/28/2010 c8 ilovepunks
aw, its soo tight on beck. i actually want him to get with maddie. sommat about alex. he's a bit annoying.

and oh my god, :O:O:O:O:O:O

5/11/2010 c7 Thing 1 and Thing 2
Madie is stupid!

Can she please make up her mind!

We get Alex is really nice, but is the thing with Beck really neccesary if it's not gonna lead anywhere?

cuz that's what is sounds like.


it is increasingly interesting because we're hoping something big is coming up.

it'd really suck if she stayed with Alex, he's a DOUCHE LORD!

then again beck seems like a dick wad too!

and Adrianna's mood is constantly changing too, making everything seem too casual like they haven't been friends forever.

so that's it!

keep up the good work

update soon!
5/4/2010 c7 SilverCharms13
So they're together... but what will happen to Beck? I have a feeling he's going to play a big role. Please update soon. Great chapter :)
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