10/28/2011 c1 6Beautility
Loved it. The movie lines seem inevitable in writing stories, but having it actually called out as such is brilliant.
Loved it. The movie lines seem inevitable in writing stories, but having it actually called out as such is brilliant.
6/14/2011 c1 10balloonfista
awwwwww :) I loved how it was a real fight and not just a stupid misunderstanding :)
Ri
awwwwww :) I loved how it was a real fight and not just a stupid misunderstanding :)
Ri
7/15/2010 c1 26Jhaynee
Adore this! I love the interjection of the movie lines haha. Honestly, at first I was a little iffy with the story because really there wasn't much a of a plot...it felt literally like a snippet and I felt that the charactes were partially one dimensional...but in the end with his whole speech, it opened up a bit more of their personalities. I did like this though, definitely!
Adore this! I love the interjection of the movie lines haha. Honestly, at first I was a little iffy with the story because really there wasn't much a of a plot...it felt literally like a snippet and I felt that the charactes were partially one dimensional...but in the end with his whole speech, it opened up a bit more of their personalities. I did like this though, definitely!
2/20/2010 c1 1Damned to heaven
Normally I'm articulate enough but all I could think was "lol". Which means loved it.
Normally I'm articulate enough but all I could think was "lol". Which means loved it.