for We're Like Dom Perignon1/16/2010 c1 
13BlackShadowWave
I LOVED this story! I'm a really cliché writer myself, so I absolutely loved every part of the story. It held an adventure full of laughs, disappointment, and bittersweet feelings, but I thoroughly enjoyed it; this is pretty much the highlight of my day (or night, or morning, since I'm writing this review at 1:20 AM right now). Agaih, LOVED it!
13BlackShadowWaveI LOVED this story! I'm a really cliché writer myself, so I absolutely loved every part of the story. It held an adventure full of laughs, disappointment, and bittersweet feelings, but I thoroughly enjoyed it; this is pretty much the highlight of my day (or night, or morning, since I'm writing this review at 1:20 AM right now). Agaih, LOVED it!
1/15/2010 c1 10funsize
oh my god this has devastated me. it is like a perfect narrative of my life last year. going to go kill myself now. ah its perfect
10funsizeoh my god this has devastated me. it is like a perfect narrative of my life last year. going to go kill myself now. ah its perfect
1/15/2010 c1 3Purple Glasses
I am such an idiot-honestly, I know I've never reviewed your other story, even though I re-read it every few weeks, BECAUSE IT IS AWESOME, but I pounced when I saw this.
You're right. This is weird. But like, an awesome weird, you know what I mean? Because you get all those light, fluffy (don't get me wrong, I love light and fluffy, but there's a limit for everything) where the best friends are ALWAYS meant to be, and after some two-faced ho, they ALWAYS get TOGETHER. It gets to the point when you can literally predict every word in the Ultimate And Ending Declaration of Love. But this, THIS WAS GOOD. Honestly, those two are really cute together, and I mean that in the platonic sense only, not like those best friends in stories where you can actually feel the sexual tension crackling and you're wondering why they're blessed with such awe-inspiring stupidity. I loved the part where they're both in the diner, partly because of the orgasmic-sound-making thing, which is totally normal, by the way, but mostly because of the way he asked her out - haha. That was awesome! Especially when he just turned back to his potato salad. It was weirdly nostalgic at the end, when she fantasises about him coming back from Stanford, without it actually happening. I actually checked back to see if she WAS fantasising, because that's how convincing that last part is. Or perhaps maybe I'm just dim at the moment.
Anyway - Zach and Summer. At first I thought, Summer. Right. Zach-loved ass Summer. OH. D'OH. I get it! I love those two, honestly, especially Zach's comment about the banging thing. It's so nice to see that he's still the same! One question though, didn't he go to NYU? Or did he transfer to Columbia?
It was great, by the way. The one-shot, which you can probably tell from my giant rant. I really wish you'll put something up, because The Champagne Gang is part of the reason I got an account in the first place, so I can revel fully in Summer's badassness and Zach's jackassness and their badassness and jackassness together.
3Purple GlassesI am such an idiot-honestly, I know I've never reviewed your other story, even though I re-read it every few weeks, BECAUSE IT IS AWESOME, but I pounced when I saw this.
You're right. This is weird. But like, an awesome weird, you know what I mean? Because you get all those light, fluffy (don't get me wrong, I love light and fluffy, but there's a limit for everything) where the best friends are ALWAYS meant to be, and after some two-faced ho, they ALWAYS get TOGETHER. It gets to the point when you can literally predict every word in the Ultimate And Ending Declaration of Love. But this, THIS WAS GOOD. Honestly, those two are really cute together, and I mean that in the platonic sense only, not like those best friends in stories where you can actually feel the sexual tension crackling and you're wondering why they're blessed with such awe-inspiring stupidity. I loved the part where they're both in the diner, partly because of the orgasmic-sound-making thing, which is totally normal, by the way, but mostly because of the way he asked her out - haha. That was awesome! Especially when he just turned back to his potato salad. It was weirdly nostalgic at the end, when she fantasises about him coming back from Stanford, without it actually happening. I actually checked back to see if she WAS fantasising, because that's how convincing that last part is. Or perhaps maybe I'm just dim at the moment.
Anyway - Zach and Summer. At first I thought, Summer. Right. Zach-loved ass Summer. OH. D'OH. I get it! I love those two, honestly, especially Zach's comment about the banging thing. It's so nice to see that he's still the same! One question though, didn't he go to NYU? Or did he transfer to Columbia?
It was great, by the way. The one-shot, which you can probably tell from my giant rant. I really wish you'll put something up, because The Champagne Gang is part of the reason I got an account in the first place, so I can revel fully in Summer's badassness and Zach's jackassness and their badassness and jackassness together.
1/15/2010 c1 2RuhFuh
Some good stuff, yeah.
Though in the beginning, it seemed like you were starting off in second person, so was that a mistake or was it intentional?
And in the part where there's two different conversations going on - in the restaurant - it took me a while to figure out what exactly was happening.
I HATE how it ends on a sad note. And I frankly love, LOVE Nick, more than anything.
And I absolutely love Tasha's nature too.
"Underneath it, Nick writes: If I say I’m like Ron without Hermione and Lenny without George, will you go out with me, Tash?"
That made me laugh. (:
All in all, good one shot. Sad ending, but I guess that happens sometimes.
2RuhFuhSome good stuff, yeah.
Though in the beginning, it seemed like you were starting off in second person, so was that a mistake or was it intentional?
And in the part where there's two different conversations going on - in the restaurant - it took me a while to figure out what exactly was happening.
I HATE how it ends on a sad note. And I frankly love, LOVE Nick, more than anything.
And I absolutely love Tasha's nature too.
"Underneath it, Nick writes: If I say I’m like Ron without Hermione and Lenny without George, will you go out with me, Tash?"
That made me laugh. (:
All in all, good one shot. Sad ending, but I guess that happens sometimes.
1/15/2010 c1 9arsenic3
I love the way this reads. Are u going to continue it? BTW wat happened to snapple coffee?
I love the way this reads. Are u going to continue it? BTW wat happened to snapple coffee?
1/15/2010 c1 6hellolonely
the was just the cutest and bittersweetest (haha) one shot ever! absolutely adorable but a little heartbreaking :(
6hellolonelythe was just the cutest and bittersweetest (haha) one shot ever! absolutely adorable but a little heartbreaking :(
1/15/2010 c1 hoplessromantic21
i really liked tasha and nick's story i kidna wish u did a fic about them now hah and them gettign a happy ending haha and love all the zach and summer ive missed them so bad!
i really liked tasha and nick's story i kidna wish u did a fic about them now hah and them gettign a happy ending haha and love all the zach and summer ive missed them so bad!
1/15/2010 c1 5likelemondrops
Obviously you weren't the only one who was missing Zach and Summer. :]
I love this one-shot. Coming home to the email that told me you had a new story up was so great, hah. Like a lot of other people said, it was sad that those two didn't end up together, but I guess that's just how things are sometimes.
Just one thing, though: at the beginning, when they're at McDonald's, it seemed like there was going to be a bit of second person point-of-view throughout the one-shot, but then it stopped. I'm not sure if you want to fix that, or if that was the way you meant it to be.
Other than that, nice job. I'm really glad to see that The Champagne Gang wasn't the end of your amazing stories.
5likelemondropsObviously you weren't the only one who was missing Zach and Summer. :]
I love this one-shot. Coming home to the email that told me you had a new story up was so great, hah. Like a lot of other people said, it was sad that those two didn't end up together, but I guess that's just how things are sometimes.
Just one thing, though: at the beginning, when they're at McDonald's, it seemed like there was going to be a bit of second person point-of-view throughout the one-shot, but then it stopped. I'm not sure if you want to fix that, or if that was the way you meant it to be.
Other than that, nice job. I'm really glad to see that The Champagne Gang wasn't the end of your amazing stories.
1/15/2010 c1 7OldKatherineJames
This?
Well, this is wonderful. :D
It's true, it's real, and it makes me wonder how in the hell you just did that, because this very thing just happened to me (without the Standford and the Columbia, hehe). It didn't turn weird, it turned in the direction of where the characters were going, and I know it's right and I know it's true because I still think: "What IF?"
Very good job. You got it. Exactly.
- KatherineJames
7OldKatherineJamesThis?
Well, this is wonderful. :D
It's true, it's real, and it makes me wonder how in the hell you just did that, because this very thing just happened to me (without the Standford and the Columbia, hehe). It didn't turn weird, it turned in the direction of where the characters were going, and I know it's right and I know it's true because I still think: "What IF?"
Very good job. You got it. Exactly.
- KatherineJames
1/15/2010 c1 4lissalee
haha, Zach and his 'frustration'. Miss those two. :'(
This story, well there's just something about it that makes it sparkle, I'm not sure what exactly. It's nicely lighthearted and not too fast paced eventhough the story progresses quickly.
I loved the little facebook part of it haha, '15 others like this' (Y) :)
4lissaleehaha, Zach and his 'frustration'. Miss those two. :'(
This story, well there's just something about it that makes it sparkle, I'm not sure what exactly. It's nicely lighthearted and not too fast paced eventhough the story progresses quickly.
I loved the little facebook part of it haha, '15 others like this' (Y) :)
1/15/2010 c1 Artume
That was really - well, something. I really enjoyed reading it. It's sad that they did not get together, but I like the ending. Perhaps she did love him, only she did not know it? Meh, it was still wonderful.
That was really - well, something. I really enjoyed reading it. It's sad that they did not get together, but I like the ending. Perhaps she did love him, only she did not know it? Meh, it was still wonderful.
1/15/2010 c1 6Little Silver Kitten
I started reading this story with a "okay...maybe it's just a coincidence that there are 2 characters names Zach and Summer... turns out it was the Zach and Summer...LOL...i'm glad they have a sort of happy ending in a sense that there are still together! Poor Nick and Tasha...things never go the way you want...sometimes feelings just don't develop, no matter how you want them to...I really enjoyed reading this even though it's not the happily after ever ending...I sincerely hope you end up doing a sequel of sorts...I MISS ZACH AND SUMMER!
6Little Silver KittenI started reading this story with a "okay...maybe it's just a coincidence that there are 2 characters names Zach and Summer... turns out it was the Zach and Summer...LOL...i'm glad they have a sort of happy ending in a sense that there are still together! Poor Nick and Tasha...things never go the way you want...sometimes feelings just don't develop, no matter how you want them to...I really enjoyed reading this even though it's not the happily after ever ending...I sincerely hope you end up doing a sequel of sorts...I MISS ZACH AND SUMMER!
1/15/2010 c1 10Kaleigh Windelynn
Not horrible at all! It's perfectly imperfect! I love it. It made me want to cry at the sheer reality that love is trivial and it does cause rifts...
This made my day.
I hope you do write something more for Zach and Summer. I miss them, too.
10Kaleigh WindelynnNot horrible at all! It's perfectly imperfect! I love it. It made me want to cry at the sheer reality that love is trivial and it does cause rifts...
This made my day.
I hope you do write something more for Zach and Summer. I miss them, too.
1/15/2010 c1 14Beautiful Destination
This was a great story! I loved the dialogue and the pacing...but was very sad when Tasha admits to Nick that she doesn't love him in a romantic way. Oh well... I guess that's life :P
14Beautiful DestinationThis was a great story! I loved the dialogue and the pacing...but was very sad when Tasha admits to Nick that she doesn't love him in a romantic way. Oh well... I guess that's life :P