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7/18/2011 c1 everyoneisMISunderstood
I absolutely loved The Champagne Gang. It was written so well, every character so incredibly detailed and fleshed out, every scene between Zach and Summer breathtaking... Your story took me about nine hours to read, and I'm an incredibly fast reader, so thank you for keeping me entertained for a lonely summer day. I loved every minute of reading about your wide range of characters, I really did. I'm just so in awe, I hope someday my writing is as amazing as yours.

Gosh, I could rave about your writing for hours and not run out of things to say. You are incredible.

This was random, I'm not going to lie. But it was very sweet, and I must say, I do like sweet things.

For a oneshot (if you're still writing for fictionpress, or at all) maybe you could write about Summer telling Zach she was the waitress that should've been hotter? Maybe I somehow missed a scene in The Champagne Gang, but I was REALLY hoping I'd get to read about that specific scenario.
6/30/2011 c1 1Ceri Anne
Awww, so sad! And not enough Summer and Zach, but still brilliant. Can't wait until you write more of these
6/9/2011 c1 2WinterInk24
Brilliant. You like wrote against that cliche of having best friends falling in love with each other. Not that I don't like that kind of story plot. It's just...that rarely anyone only focuses on the unrequited love of a best friend. Usually, its overshadowed with the pairing of the main girl and like an outsider. Reading this hurt though. Poor Nick. Poor Tasha. Those letter snippets showed the guilt and frustration yet love she feels to Nick. And that dream at the end was bittersweet. This whole one-shot can be described to me as bittersweet. The dynamic of Tasha and Nick was hilarious. They were fun together. And I really thought Tasha was going to to say yes to Nick's question. But then after that message in the sky, and Tasha saying no...I got that bad feeling in the pit of my stomach. Aw. Great great writing.
5/21/2011 c1 i am a girl
you're a super good writer. this is very sad. great job, hope for more.
3/30/2011 c1 7ChargedPotential
This made my heart ache in the best way possible. More, please.
3/25/2011 c1 little.artist
Brilliant. But still :'(
3/24/2011 c1 25Kyllex

This was kind of...sad. I was hoping the oneshot would be about Zach and Summer, but this is really cute, too. Even if it does have a bittersweet ending.

Poor Nick.

I like the characters and I love your writing! Write more oneshots! I would love to read more about Eve and Michael, or Roxanne, or maybe Summer's family. Jazz. Anyone, really. Haha.
2/20/2011 c1 AellaMae
It's cute!

But... were Nick and Tasha in the story before?

I can't seem to remember them; oh well, I am known for my short term memory loss...

Haha, I love all the guys in your stories! They're all so adorable. Too bad most guys aren't like that in real life.

Oh yeah, and I should add, this is one of the best stories in fictionpress! I asked my friends which one they liked the mst, and they ALL said champagne gang :)
2/11/2011 c1 YOUNG-the wild. free. in love
First of all, I really like this story, but I got more of Nick and Tasha story than THE CHAMPAGNE GANG...you know what i mean? I miss reading about Summer and Zach not Tasha and Nick. Whoever they may be. I wish you would continue writing about ZACH AND SUMMER AND THE WHOLE GANG. but great and awesome story.
2/9/2011 c1 4Kanari Toneriko
ok wow. this is weird coz I just had the tashaXnick experience.

especially the last part where Tasha dreams of saying "yes" to nick... someday? or never?

wow. talk about coincidence. :O

:D good job.
2/6/2011 c1 valpal4630
who's tasha and nick?

cant wait till you write about zach and summer :)
2/5/2011 c1 oxBlueEyes15xo
Will you continue with this? It would be great to revisit some of those other characters, but also mostly Zach and Summer (in a prefered good setting! No heartache)

I love how effortless your writing is, I can just skimmer through without any trouble, completely consumed.
2/4/2011 c1 Anon
Of course it's not horrible! You can't possible write horrible :P It was so sad (poor Nick) but very realistic which is refreshing and I especially like how Tasha's all conflicted because she wants to love him that way but can't. I've forgotten who Nick and Tasha are though =\ *feels guilty* Anyway, thanks for writing this, it makes me want to read Champgane Gang again. :D
1/2/2011 c1 Tesachex
The way you end this story is realistic and that is a huge acheivement for any writer in my opinion. There are so many stories where writers forsake reality to make the readers happy. I think it's good to do that sometime but it's not always realistic, especially if they do it for every single one of their stories. A story that's realistic can always make a reader like a character, a plot, or a story more because they can relate more to them/it. You did a perfect job with that which is very rare to see in a story. You showed us that there is more than just loving a person or not loving them. In Tasha's case, she didn't love him in that way, even if she wanted to. There are so many people who can relate to that. Not every couple ends up together. Good job at showing that.

Sorry this review is so long, I just can't write everything I'm thinking in two or three sentences.
1/1/2011 c1 reindrops
It's quite cute, though I just want more Zach and Summer moments. :D
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