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1/24/2010 c1 59A Rose in Weeds
Very little but very unique. I especially like the concept of spacing apart for 5 lines. Shows that it happened repeatedly which makes the piece more alluring.

Keep writing.
1/18/2010 c1 82steffxnie
Nice short piece. I like the idea. I think it would better to have 'apart' horizontally like 'a p a r t' than vertically but both versions of formatting are effective. Anyway, keep writing! :)

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