
5/25/2017 c4 shirsong
God what is that adorable thing?
To those who have problem with slash, be calm, you can read it, there is no slash here
God what is that adorable thing?
To those who have problem with slash, be calm, you can read it, there is no slash here
7/17/2014 c4 Emily
This is amazing
Absolutely
Amazing
This is amazing
Absolutely
Amazing
3/17/2014 c4
16Oshini
I LOVE this sooo mmuch! Oh mu god, I want MORE! Hahaha, but really, this is such an amazing story. I'm used to reading stories of the main character being able to see ghosts, and I thought this story might be a little like that, but it's so much more. I love that Jared sees monsters, and that they're actually revealing themselves. The little flashbacks of Jared and Agni are what really get to me; they're just so cute! Anyway, I hope you find time to update this story soon!
Oshini

I LOVE this sooo mmuch! Oh mu god, I want MORE! Hahaha, but really, this is such an amazing story. I'm used to reading stories of the main character being able to see ghosts, and I thought this story might be a little like that, but it's so much more. I love that Jared sees monsters, and that they're actually revealing themselves. The little flashbacks of Jared and Agni are what really get to me; they're just so cute! Anyway, I hope you find time to update this story soon!
Oshini
1/20/2014 c4
1rAiNwAtEr1
I'm completely in love with the concept of this story. I hope you find the time to update. I adore Agni, and can't help but think his adult attitude -with I think fits him wonderfully lol- has something to do with him losing Agni.

I'm completely in love with the concept of this story. I hope you find the time to update. I adore Agni, and can't help but think his adult attitude -with I think fits him wonderfully lol- has something to do with him losing Agni.
1/18/2014 c4
1under-the-sea-dragon
This is a really good story. I'd love to read more of this if there is any updates

This is a really good story. I'd love to read more of this if there is any updates
9/27/2013 c3 Oni
I just started reading chapter 3 and have yet to find anything inappropriate. I am emailing a copy to my 15 year old niece and her best friend who just came out of the closet this month. I think this story is safe and a good read for them. Thanks.
I just started reading chapter 3 and have yet to find anything inappropriate. I am emailing a copy to my 15 year old niece and her best friend who just came out of the closet this month. I think this story is safe and a good read for them. Thanks.
9/3/2013 c4 Lunar of dreams
Ok I'm enjoying your story but...
I hate that fact I haven't see some the action also does he fall for the monster under his bed when he was younger?
Because I don't think you wouldn't be going in detail for no reason so I'm unsure or are you going to bring a guy in? I'm so unsure
Ok I'm enjoying your story but...
I hate that fact I haven't see some the action also does he fall for the monster under his bed when he was younger?
Because I don't think you wouldn't be going in detail for no reason so I'm unsure or are you going to bring a guy in? I'm so unsure
9/2/2013 c3 Lunar of dreams
LOL honestly I love how he went to bed also when is he going to fall for someone because I really want to see the action
xxx
Ps I like your story so far
LOL honestly I love how he went to bed also when is he going to fall for someone because I really want to see the action
xxx
Ps I like your story so far
8/9/2013 c4
3no-ones-puppet
This is absolutely adorable... And while I know that it's been about 3 years since you last updated it I hope that one day it may get finished! I mean, I kind of really want to see Jared and Agni reunited. :)

This is absolutely adorable... And while I know that it's been about 3 years since you last updated it I hope that one day it may get finished! I mean, I kind of really want to see Jared and Agni reunited. :)
8/5/2013 c1 Scavanger
This story is fantastic. I would love to read more. If you have any qualms about it's quality that are preventing you from updating (as many seem to) then discard them immediately. If you're just busy then I understand.
This story is fantastic. I would love to read more. If you have any qualms about it's quality that are preventing you from updating (as many seem to) then discard them immediately. If you're just busy then I understand.
5/2/2013 c4 Guest
New chapter update please!?
New chapter update please!?
3/27/2013 c4 smiling
and YAAAYYY! i can't help thinking i want more, but that seems like a nice place to end...
and YAAAYYY! i can't help thinking i want more, but that seems like a nice place to end...
3/27/2013 c3 smiling
Beautiful.
really like this, though ... probably just me, but the "monster takeover thing" ...
dunno.
it's just yummy!
Beautiful.
really like this, though ... probably just me, but the "monster takeover thing" ...
dunno.
it's just yummy!