for V21/29/2012 c19 Destination Oasis
Love Camden.
Love Camden.
12/19/2011 c18 Owlisheyes
It was a long wait but this was an amazing chapter. Those last few lines were especially poignant, with him putting his arm around her and saying he was sorry. Camden seems like he really needs some guidance and therapy. I can't wait to see what happens next. Hopefully the wait won't be as long.
It was a long wait but this was an amazing chapter. Those last few lines were especially poignant, with him putting his arm around her and saying he was sorry. Camden seems like he really needs some guidance and therapy. I can't wait to see what happens next. Hopefully the wait won't be as long.
12/18/2011 c18 MidnightLunar
Hmm, this story feels dragged out now. And less believable with the chapter, I don't think it can go anywhere but lets see.
Hmm, this story feels dragged out now. And less believable with the chapter, I don't think it can go anywhere but lets see.
12/18/2011 c18 tamarv
I foresee dark times ahead for Camden. Very dark times. This was yet another beautiful, almost poetic chapter. You should publish, you know. This is how good your story is. Also, please update more often. Thank you!
I foresee dark times ahead for Camden. Very dark times. This was yet another beautiful, almost poetic chapter. You should publish, you know. This is how good your story is. Also, please update more often. Thank you!
9/8/2011 c16 Owlish
I'm curious as to what he wrote. I find myself wondering where this story goes. I've been following Trevor and Camden for years, haha. Can't wait for you to put tye first story back up.
I'm curious as to what he wrote. I find myself wondering where this story goes. I've been following Trevor and Camden for years, haha. Can't wait for you to put tye first story back up.
8/13/2011 c14 flyei
This is one of those stories that are hard to follow if you only read the current update. Which I did after skimming the earlier ones. So basically, I have no idea what is going on but I have no intention to stop reading ;) I just really wish you would put the original Verbatim up and start the rewrite as a new story. I think a lot of people don't read this one because they have no idea what happened in the prequel. Oh, btw I left my earlier reviews as 'mela'.. yeah I have a real skill at creating dorky nicknames.
This is one of those stories that are hard to follow if you only read the current update. Which I did after skimming the earlier ones. So basically, I have no idea what is going on but I have no intention to stop reading ;) I just really wish you would put the original Verbatim up and start the rewrite as a new story. I think a lot of people don't read this one because they have no idea what happened in the prequel. Oh, btw I left my earlier reviews as 'mela'.. yeah I have a real skill at creating dorky nicknames.
4/30/2011 c13 kawaiiminnachan
aw poor cam
aw poor cam
4/24/2011 c13 Owlish
Camden needs some help. Poor baby.
Camden needs some help. Poor baby.
3/31/2011 c12 kawaiiminnachan
awesome it's updated! i think i understood about 5 lines worth of what was going on, but yay update. from what i understand, camden is...feeling insecure about his relationship with trevor?
awesome it's updated! i think i understood about 5 lines worth of what was going on, but yay update. from what i understand, camden is...feeling insecure about his relationship with trevor?
3/28/2011 c12 Owlish
You updated! It was enjoyable to see Dennis and Dan return. It's like Camden needs to get his head on straight, poor guy. Looking forward to your update next month.
You updated! It was enjoyable to see Dennis and Dan return. It's like Camden needs to get his head on straight, poor guy. Looking forward to your update next month.
2/3/2011 c11 MidnightLunar
I wish your updates were longer, comparing to the time you use everytime you update.
I wish your updates were longer, comparing to the time you use everytime you update.
1/29/2011 c10 kawaiiminnachan
Aw poor Camden, he is like a quiet drama queen. I didn't understand what he was talking about, though it seems like Trevor somewhat did and responded. When Camden talks in this chapter, it's very vague and hard to follow. But that last sentence there, beautiful. "He briskly nodded to the owner and left the shop. He walked around the corner, behind a dumpster, where he could cry in peace." Well said.
Aw poor Camden, he is like a quiet drama queen. I didn't understand what he was talking about, though it seems like Trevor somewhat did and responded. When Camden talks in this chapter, it's very vague and hard to follow. But that last sentence there, beautiful. "He briskly nodded to the owner and left the shop. He walked around the corner, behind a dumpster, where he could cry in peace." Well said.
1/3/2011 c9 Owlish
Sad there was no December update. Will Verbatim be back up this year?
Sad there was no December update. Will Verbatim be back up this year?
11/23/2010 c1 Owlish
Yes! You updated :D I'm two days late but I'm ready to read. Going to gobble down the 9th chapter now. Any chance Verbatim will be back soon? I miss it.
Yes! You updated :D I'm two days late but I'm ready to read. Going to gobble down the 9th chapter now. Any chance Verbatim will be back soon? I miss it.