for Gone1/24/2010 c1 Isca
I love the dandelion imagery and the alliteration of "rough in the ridges." Keep up the good work. :)
I love the dandelion imagery and the alliteration of "rough in the ridges." Keep up the good work. :)
1/23/2010 c1 fleur de l'est
I love the concepts dandelions bring, I've tried to write dandelion poems too :) This one is great, and the intrinsic brevity of a haiku reflects the brevity of dandelions' lives / love.
I love the concepts dandelions bring, I've tried to write dandelion poems too :) This one is great, and the intrinsic brevity of a haiku reflects the brevity of dandelions' lives / love.
1/21/2010 c1 
81Princess-anna57
Oh this is quite a sad haiku. The imagery is great. This really speaks to me. Please write on!
~Anna~ ^_^
81Princess-anna57Oh this is quite a sad haiku. The imagery is great. This really speaks to me. Please write on!
~Anna~ ^_^