for Cry Tough1/31/2010 c1 
17sunday night sky
This is beautiful. Very powerful. The melody of it is almost like a nursery rhyme, like your grandfather is trying to warn you about life while you are still young, so you can survive it. A very strong message. I love the repetition and simplicity of it, every word is perfectly place. Stunning.
17sunday night skyThis is beautiful. Very powerful. The melody of it is almost like a nursery rhyme, like your grandfather is trying to warn you about life while you are still young, so you can survive it. A very strong message. I love the repetition and simplicity of it, every word is perfectly place. Stunning.
1/24/2010 c1 Isca
"If you cry at all, cry for a noble death." Wow. Wise words. I like this line.
"Cry tough." I like that. It's kind of an oxymoron, I suppose, but it's beautiful nonetheless.
"If you cry at all, cry for a noble death." Wow. Wise words. I like this line.
"Cry tough." I like that. It's kind of an oxymoron, I suppose, but it's beautiful nonetheless.
1/21/2010 c1 26Amaya K. Lilium
I like the idea and tone behind this piece. I especially like the repetition of "Don't let them catch you. Cry touch if the tears must fall." The ending felt very abrupt to me, however. You have such a powerful message here; I was hoping you would expand on it more. Other than that, nice job.
26Amaya K. LiliumI like the idea and tone behind this piece. I especially like the repetition of "Don't let them catch you. Cry touch if the tears must fall." The ending felt very abrupt to me, however. You have such a powerful message here; I was hoping you would expand on it more. Other than that, nice job.