
8/1/2011 c20 m
Also, I was just going through your reviews. Am I the only person who loves Chris with all her heart? Bah...Gonna cry again.
Also, I was just going through your reviews. Am I the only person who loves Chris with all her heart? Bah...Gonna cry again.
8/1/2011 c20 m
let her get Chris back! SOB SOB SOB. WHY DOES HE HAVE TO BE DEAD? Just so you know... this is like the fifth time this story has made me cry. Also, you made me love this song. Konstantine, I mean. I listen to it all the time, especially when I'm travelling. Just over and over again. It makes my heart really sad, but I love it anyways.
let her get Chris back! SOB SOB SOB. WHY DOES HE HAVE TO BE DEAD? Just so you know... this is like the fifth time this story has made me cry. Also, you made me love this song. Konstantine, I mean. I listen to it all the time, especially when I'm travelling. Just over and over again. It makes my heart really sad, but I love it anyways.
7/31/2011 c20
2Sierra507
This chapter was sort of adorable, as Konstantine smiles in it for the entire day. I think Shaun and Jessica are a great family to Kon, and even Carol is warming up now!
Looovvedd their present; the keys were soo cool!
Oh, Nate. Why so hot and cold? :O
And, I don't understand what sort of love did Kon have with him. Did he even love her? It's sort of weird, because he only remember her birthday once, but then again, he sang for her...omg, i'm confused.
Anyway, great chapter!

This chapter was sort of adorable, as Konstantine smiles in it for the entire day. I think Shaun and Jessica are a great family to Kon, and even Carol is warming up now!
Looovvedd their present; the keys were soo cool!
Oh, Nate. Why so hot and cold? :O
And, I don't understand what sort of love did Kon have with him. Did he even love her? It's sort of weird, because he only remember her birthday once, but then again, he sang for her...omg, i'm confused.
Anyway, great chapter!
7/31/2011 c20 Chelsea Taylor
I just wanted to inform you of the fact that you are an AMAZING author. I followed this story about a year ago (maybe), but then somehow I lost track of it. Last night I took a glimpse through the Romance section, and I saw Chroma and the name Nate in the summary. Honestly, I almost had a heart attack from excitement. I clicked on the story and reread the beginning part to refresh myself. The ten chapters I hadn't read were GREAT, and I am so ecstatic that I found this story again! Great job! (: Can't wait to read more!
I just wanted to inform you of the fact that you are an AMAZING author. I followed this story about a year ago (maybe), but then somehow I lost track of it. Last night I took a glimpse through the Romance section, and I saw Chroma and the name Nate in the summary. Honestly, I almost had a heart attack from excitement. I clicked on the story and reread the beginning part to refresh myself. The ten chapters I hadn't read were GREAT, and I am so ecstatic that I found this story again! Great job! (: Can't wait to read more!
7/31/2011 c20
2THis doesn't even exist
Tiny or not, this was an amazing chapter.
Nate is my favorite person in the world, because even if he isn't talking to her, he still gives her a birthday present. And it's something that means a lot. Whether he knows why or not, he just knows that it means something.
The rest of the gifts were fine. Books are something she enjoys, but of course the CD is more personal than anything else.
I'm seeing Blink 182 in concert :D
I'm thrilled. I also get to see MCR, but I'm not as excited about that. I only like a few of their songs.
Anyway, wonderful as alwaysss.
~Chelsey

Tiny or not, this was an amazing chapter.
Nate is my favorite person in the world, because even if he isn't talking to her, he still gives her a birthday present. And it's something that means a lot. Whether he knows why or not, he just knows that it means something.
The rest of the gifts were fine. Books are something she enjoys, but of course the CD is more personal than anything else.
I'm seeing Blink 182 in concert :D
I'm thrilled. I also get to see MCR, but I'm not as excited about that. I only like a few of their songs.
Anyway, wonderful as alwaysss.
~Chelsey
7/31/2011 c20 strangledice
I almost cried when Konstantine opened Nate's gift to her.
Great chapter! Update soon!:)
I almost cried when Konstantine opened Nate's gift to her.
Great chapter! Update soon!:)
7/30/2011 c20 TabbzRockZ
Wow.. So I just found this story and read the entire thing up to this point. I think this is a wonderful story and keep me just waiting for more... and crying gosh I just wanted to cry in so many parts. Then when I finished i went and listened to the song for the first time and just wanted to ball. I held it in till the end and the tears just came. I feel like I was in the story watching it. It seems so real and that is amazing. It is hard to find stories that do that anymore. You are really talented and I can not wait until the next update. It's funny cuz through readin the story I really liked nate and I still totally do but as soon as I listened to the song my whole heart hurt for chris and I really fell in love with his character even if he really isn't "in" the story!
Wow.. So I just found this story and read the entire thing up to this point. I think this is a wonderful story and keep me just waiting for more... and crying gosh I just wanted to cry in so many parts. Then when I finished i went and listened to the song for the first time and just wanted to ball. I held it in till the end and the tears just came. I feel like I was in the story watching it. It seems so real and that is amazing. It is hard to find stories that do that anymore. You are really talented and I can not wait until the next update. It's funny cuz through readin the story I really liked nate and I still totally do but as soon as I listened to the song my whole heart hurt for chris and I really fell in love with his character even if he really isn't "in" the story!
7/30/2011 c20
9rukz
found the chapter a little fast moving, I got in the essentials of what's happening but I think your earlier chapters have move depth in it.
glad to see the re-lapse moment, I thought she was getting over Chris to quick and he wasn't mentioned much these last few chapters.
nice chapter, Fanxz for the fast upload.

found the chapter a little fast moving, I got in the essentials of what's happening but I think your earlier chapters have move depth in it.
glad to see the re-lapse moment, I thought she was getting over Chris to quick and he wasn't mentioned much these last few chapters.
nice chapter, Fanxz for the fast upload.
7/30/2011 c20
25Kyllex
I loved this chapter...except for the end. I just wish Kon would realize that Chris was NOT good for her and that she deserves everything she's been given since he died. I don't want her to feel like she would trade it all to have Chris back. She's not supposed to want that. D:
I love that Kon was actually happy about all the birthday festivities instead of all grumpy and frumpy. It makes me happy to see her happy. And I still love Nate. I wish he would just talk to her already. I was so surprised that he got her the CD as a gift! Wow.
Can't wait for more! Thanks for updating!

I loved this chapter...except for the end. I just wish Kon would realize that Chris was NOT good for her and that she deserves everything she's been given since he died. I don't want her to feel like she would trade it all to have Chris back. She's not supposed to want that. D:
I love that Kon was actually happy about all the birthday festivities instead of all grumpy and frumpy. It makes me happy to see her happy. And I still love Nate. I wish he would just talk to her already. I was so surprised that he got her the CD as a gift! Wow.
Can't wait for more! Thanks for updating!
7/25/2011 c19
2Sierra507
Oohh, a quick update! (:
Well, i'm really glad that Jess and Leslie are alright apart from a few in juries. And wow, Carol is warming up more to Kon!
Eh, Kon and Nate are back to where they started, huh? Not speaking to each other.
That piece of writing by Nate; he really does observe alot doesn't he?
And Max and Keaton! I thought Leslie's stunt would push them apart, instead of together! How can Max do that to her best friend?

Oohh, a quick update! (:
Well, i'm really glad that Jess and Leslie are alright apart from a few in juries. And wow, Carol is warming up more to Kon!
Eh, Kon and Nate are back to where they started, huh? Not speaking to each other.
That piece of writing by Nate; he really does observe alot doesn't he?
And Max and Keaton! I thought Leslie's stunt would push them apart, instead of together! How can Max do that to her best friend?
7/24/2011 c19
25Kyllex
Ahhh I want to know so badly why Sanders reacted that way to Nate giving Kon some of his writing. WHICH, by the way, was fantastic. I love that boy.
(Yes, I am aware that you actually wrote that...since you created Nate...but HEY. I'm allowed to be a fan, right?)
I'm glad that Jess and Leslie are okay. And I'm also glad that Max and Keats are finally together, even if it is in secret. :)
I can't wait for the next chapter! I want Nate to stop ignoring Kon. :( Keep up the good work!

Ahhh I want to know so badly why Sanders reacted that way to Nate giving Kon some of his writing. WHICH, by the way, was fantastic. I love that boy.
(Yes, I am aware that you actually wrote that...since you created Nate...but HEY. I'm allowed to be a fan, right?)
I'm glad that Jess and Leslie are okay. And I'm also glad that Max and Keats are finally together, even if it is in secret. :)
I can't wait for the next chapter! I want Nate to stop ignoring Kon. :( Keep up the good work!
7/24/2011 c19
2THis doesn't even exist
:( Too Short.
How many people saw the reference to the song?
I cried with excitement when I saw that Chris asked "Does anybody need that room?"
SO COOL.
I love the little stuff like that.
I would totally beta for you, but I never have much to criticize. Or do you spell it criticise? haha. Australia...
Anyway. I love this chapter as much as any other, you know, other than the fact that it's shorter than the rest. I dislike that there isn't any real Nate in it, because he's the most interesting character, as intended I'm sure. But I loved Sander's reaction. That was enough for my Nate wanting. I'm just really curious about what they talked about that would make him react like that though.
But was the writing really about Konstantine? I feel it's strange for her to assume that. For the most part, I would think that Kon would assume it WASN'T about her... Very strange.
Anyway, I loved it, and I love you, and I would like to read more soon :)

:( Too Short.
How many people saw the reference to the song?
I cried with excitement when I saw that Chris asked "Does anybody need that room?"
SO COOL.
I love the little stuff like that.
I would totally beta for you, but I never have much to criticize. Or do you spell it criticise? haha. Australia...
Anyway. I love this chapter as much as any other, you know, other than the fact that it's shorter than the rest. I dislike that there isn't any real Nate in it, because he's the most interesting character, as intended I'm sure. But I loved Sander's reaction. That was enough for my Nate wanting. I'm just really curious about what they talked about that would make him react like that though.
But was the writing really about Konstantine? I feel it's strange for her to assume that. For the most part, I would think that Kon would assume it WASN'T about her... Very strange.
Anyway, I loved it, and I love you, and I would like to read more soon :)
7/24/2011 c19 Guest
I am hooked. Can't wait for more. I haven't read all the other chapters but I will search them out now
I am hooked. Can't wait for more. I haven't read all the other chapters but I will search them out now
7/24/2011 c19 Anon
A bit late feedback I guess considering the chapter's been up for a day or so? I don't know... anyway it was brilliant. You just keep providing us with even better chapters each time I come back to check. Absolute brilliance. I hope Nate and Kon sort things out though, I love those two :) Can't wait for the next chapter, hope I'm not waiting too long :)
A bit late feedback I guess considering the chapter's been up for a day or so? I don't know... anyway it was brilliant. You just keep providing us with even better chapters each time I come back to check. Absolute brilliance. I hope Nate and Kon sort things out though, I love those two :) Can't wait for the next chapter, hope I'm not waiting too long :)