for Chroma10/18/2014 c31 Guest
i sat down and read this in one whole sitting and it's beautiful. thank you for writing this and i'm also fairly sure i have a long new playlist to listen to with all the songs in each chapter. :)
i sat down and read this in one whole sitting and it's beautiful. thank you for writing this and i'm also fairly sure i have a long new playlist to listen to with all the songs in each chapter. :)
7/16/2014 c31 windlessnitez
Its over but it sounds like a beginning. question what happened to Kon and Nate?
Its over but it sounds like a beginning. question what happened to Kon and Nate?
4/15/2014 c31 Guest
Can I just say you made me cry so many times reading this. Beautifully haunting.
Can I just say you made me cry so many times reading this. Beautifully haunting.
3/22/2014 c31 
1WYMamataro
I felt every ounce of pain! Will there be a sequel? I saw closure but...I felt like I want more! Hehe...
1WYMamataroI felt every ounce of pain! Will there be a sequel? I saw closure but...I felt like I want more! Hehe...
3/5/2014 c15 Ystarr
This chapter was perfection. It makes me shiver how perfectly you described everything, raw and pure. Amazing
This chapter was perfection. It makes me shiver how perfectly you described everything, raw and pure. Amazing
1/22/2014 c31 Jessy-8739
I think this is my favorite book so far on fictionpress, and that saying something cause i've read a lot P
You craft a world with so many layers. A world with a flawless cover full of rich and beautiful teenagers that seem to have a perfect life, but if you dig deeper, you can find tinges of sadness mixed within everyone. It's heartbreakingly beautiful :)
I think this is my favorite book so far on fictionpress, and that saying something cause i've read a lot P
You craft a world with so many layers. A world with a flawless cover full of rich and beautiful teenagers that seem to have a perfect life, but if you dig deeper, you can find tinges of sadness mixed within everyone. It's heartbreakingly beautiful :)
1/21/2014 c7 Jessy-8739
oh my god, I'm in love with this story! it connects soooo well with the song. seriously. but umm... I'm understand that Chris died (so sad), but.. how did he die?
(sorry if this is a stupid question)
oh my god, I'm in love with this story! it connects soooo well with the song. seriously. but umm... I'm understand that Chris died (so sad), but.. how did he die?
(sorry if this is a stupid question)
1/6/2014 c31 sinkingshorelines
This was beautiful... painfully utterly beautiful. I swear my heart was pounding almost the whole time I was reading this. I've read a lot but I have never seriously gotten this immersed, so moved as if something just clicked in my heart and stayed there. I have never been this attached to mere fictional characters that I felt myself falling for them. I was crying for their pain and eventually laughing uncontrollably when I realized how pathetic I looked. But this is seriously just pure genius and I can't even begin to fathom how a mere mortal like you (and very much like myself) were able to come up with something like this. So, help me god as I try to move on from this as I am still in complete denial that this has ended for me. It should have never ended... but that's just me and my wishful thinking.
This was beautiful... painfully utterly beautiful. I swear my heart was pounding almost the whole time I was reading this. I've read a lot but I have never seriously gotten this immersed, so moved as if something just clicked in my heart and stayed there. I have never been this attached to mere fictional characters that I felt myself falling for them. I was crying for their pain and eventually laughing uncontrollably when I realized how pathetic I looked. But this is seriously just pure genius and I can't even begin to fathom how a mere mortal like you (and very much like myself) were able to come up with something like this. So, help me god as I try to move on from this as I am still in complete denial that this has ended for me. It should have never ended... but that's just me and my wishful thinking.
12/23/2013 c31 2GraceSaader
Wow. Just wow. Reading this I got extremely jealous that you had written something so raw and so freaking twisted that it was beautiful, because I had wanted to write something like this for a very long time. It doesn't feel finished. I'm hoping that you have more stories like this to your pen name.
2GraceSaaderWow. Just wow. Reading this I got extremely jealous that you had written something so raw and so freaking twisted that it was beautiful, because I had wanted to write something like this for a very long time. It doesn't feel finished. I'm hoping that you have more stories like this to your pen name.
12/9/2013 c31 69Shadowswept
I'm crying right now. That was a beautiful ending. She came home to the family that loves her, and she had a lovely vision of Chris without the horror. I'm equal parts happy and sad. The best stories never seem long enough. I always want more, but I thought this was a perfect way to end this book. I'm not a big fan of sequels for the most part. They are rarely as good as the first book, but there are exceptions. I feel that this is one of them. These characters are fascinating enough for a second book. I'd love to read about Nate's life at college, and Kon's life at college. They've only just begun their romantic relationship, so I'd also like to read more about that. You said that you know the futures of all the characters, so I'm hoping you'll continue the story once you finish college.
I'm afraid to ask you if Nate and Kon stay together in the future. I know what I want, but you're the author. I hope I see this book published in the not too distant future-and its sequel. Thank you for this amazing story. I can't even tell you how much I enjoyed it and how much I'll miss these characters. This felt like more than entertainment. It felt like getting to know real people, like they really exist out there in the world. I'm one of the lucky ones who found this story right before you finished writing it. I didn't have to wait for updates, but I absolutely would have. These characters are unforgettable.
69ShadowsweptI'm crying right now. That was a beautiful ending. She came home to the family that loves her, and she had a lovely vision of Chris without the horror. I'm equal parts happy and sad. The best stories never seem long enough. I always want more, but I thought this was a perfect way to end this book. I'm not a big fan of sequels for the most part. They are rarely as good as the first book, but there are exceptions. I feel that this is one of them. These characters are fascinating enough for a second book. I'd love to read about Nate's life at college, and Kon's life at college. They've only just begun their romantic relationship, so I'd also like to read more about that. You said that you know the futures of all the characters, so I'm hoping you'll continue the story once you finish college.
I'm afraid to ask you if Nate and Kon stay together in the future. I know what I want, but you're the author. I hope I see this book published in the not too distant future-and its sequel. Thank you for this amazing story. I can't even tell you how much I enjoyed it and how much I'll miss these characters. This felt like more than entertainment. It felt like getting to know real people, like they really exist out there in the world. I'm one of the lucky ones who found this story right before you finished writing it. I didn't have to wait for updates, but I absolutely would have. These characters are unforgettable.
12/9/2013 c30 Shadowswept
I knew he was leaving, but I still wasn't ready for it. I don't believe that this is the end though. Distance won't be an obstacle for them. They're not fickle people. I like what he said to her, that he doesn't know. That's what drew them together, because they were so used to knowing things about other people. They have so much in common, and they understand each other. And he wants her to know him, to know everything about him. I'm hoping that means that he'll want to share everything with her, including his future.
Kon's life is so different now with her dad. She had no one to visit her in the hospital after the crash with Chris, no one to care about her. It seems to me like this will be a turning point in her life. She has a real family now.
I knew he was leaving, but I still wasn't ready for it. I don't believe that this is the end though. Distance won't be an obstacle for them. They're not fickle people. I like what he said to her, that he doesn't know. That's what drew them together, because they were so used to knowing things about other people. They have so much in common, and they understand each other. And he wants her to know him, to know everything about him. I'm hoping that means that he'll want to share everything with her, including his future.
Kon's life is so different now with her dad. She had no one to visit her in the hospital after the crash with Chris, no one to care about her. It seems to me like this will be a turning point in her life. She has a real family now.
12/9/2013 c29 Shadowswept
That flashback was crazy! Chris completely lost his mind in that moment. Chase is so wrong to blame Kon for it, but I guess he's frustrated because he can't take it out on Chris on account of him being dead. He's turned on Kon, because she was the closest person to Chris. He doesn't even see himself. He's buying drugs after what happened to his sister. I do feel bad for Jon, because he felt he had to turn to selling to have enough money to fit in with his friends. He's making a big mistake, though, because it could jeopardize his future. I'm glad that Kon's dad found her, and that she escaped that life. I'm hoping she's okay after the accident.
That flashback was crazy! Chris completely lost his mind in that moment. Chase is so wrong to blame Kon for it, but I guess he's frustrated because he can't take it out on Chris on account of him being dead. He's turned on Kon, because she was the closest person to Chris. He doesn't even see himself. He's buying drugs after what happened to his sister. I do feel bad for Jon, because he felt he had to turn to selling to have enough money to fit in with his friends. He's making a big mistake, though, because it could jeopardize his future. I'm glad that Kon's dad found her, and that she escaped that life. I'm hoping she's okay after the accident.
12/8/2013 c28 Shadowswept
Like a song that ends suddenly, on a drumbeat, and makes you feel like you can conquer the world. I love that! I know that feeling, but I haven't felt it in awhile. That's an amazing way to describe what she's experiencing with Nate. So yeah, I'm loving this development between them. Don't take it away!
I'm a little concerned about the kiss that felt like goodbye.
Also, why the hell is Chase back? Okay, I feel bad about Chelsea. That was a horrible thing for Chris to do. Chelsea was at fault too, and maybe she would have gotten it from someone else eventually, but it didn't have to be him. What a mess he made out of everything! And why is Jon with Chase? Guess I'll find out soon, but that's a twist I didn't see coming.
Like a song that ends suddenly, on a drumbeat, and makes you feel like you can conquer the world. I love that! I know that feeling, but I haven't felt it in awhile. That's an amazing way to describe what she's experiencing with Nate. So yeah, I'm loving this development between them. Don't take it away!
I'm a little concerned about the kiss that felt like goodbye.
Also, why the hell is Chase back? Okay, I feel bad about Chelsea. That was a horrible thing for Chris to do. Chelsea was at fault too, and maybe she would have gotten it from someone else eventually, but it didn't have to be him. What a mess he made out of everything! And why is Jon with Chase? Guess I'll find out soon, but that's a twist I didn't see coming.