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7/16/2011 c18 Sheri
How could you do this to me! :P

Dude, you gots to upload sooooon. Don't leave me hanging. :P

Good chapter. Loved it, like the rest of the story.

You're amazing. :)
7/14/2011 c17 Sheri your Tumblr friend P
Wow! I...uh...don't know what to say. This is story is so fantastic, it's not even funny. I mean seriously, lend me your skills? Please? Pretty please?

Alora, you're amazing. Really. Upload soooooooooooooooon. :D

Like I said before, this story line is new. And it's interesting. You have a way of keeping me interested. Which is realllllllly good.

I'm starting to like Nate a lot more now. I don't think I like Chris. I don't know. Jess is adorable. I think Max and Keats should get together, and I don't know why, but I think of Leslie as gay :/. Bryce is a naughty word :P So's Tessah. Dr Sander's is so coooool. I like him too. Brittany's quiet and she and Jon should get together. Sorry, this is what I think will happen. Lol. :/

It's funny, we both have Tessa/h's in our stories :P

You're an amazing writer and one day, I'm sure, this'll get published. It's a refreshingly new plot and I think a lot of people that don't read on the internet would enjoy this. I, for one, would buy it and read it again.
7/14/2011 c14 Sheri your Tumblr friend
Wow! Alora! You're amazing. I haven't been able to stop reading. This story is fantastic. I love it. :D (and it's stopping me from my writing. That's how good it it :P)

The whole story line is new. And I honestly love it. You describe everything the best way possible. And it's not too much either.

You're amazing. Keep it up. :D
4/25/2011 c17 2Sierra507
Hi, Alora

i read your story in one go, since i found it on FP last night, which is very bad of me as i should be studying since i have exams soon, but instead i neglected Physics to breathlessly read your amazing story. :D Eh, who cares about physics anyways?

And i love the song Konstantine. When i saw that the main lead's name was that, i thought 'Screw physics! Someone finally likes Something Corporate!'

I have to say, this plot is very different to what i've read before. I've read many boyfriend-dying-girl-becoming-depressed stories, but Konstantine deals it with a different way. It's weird. But a good weird. I swear i would have broken my laptop's screen if Kon turned out to be another Bella Swan.

One thing i like about your story is the characters. U've shown that blood ties aren't that important. They are to an extent since Shaun took Kon in immediately, but the way Nate and Jess care about each other or the way Carol is, or how Jess calls Shaun 'daddy' it shows great bonding between people who don't need to be bonded. So It's one of my fave things about your story.

Now, i don't know if i missed it or something but have u explained the significance of 11:11? Is it the time Chris died? how did he die anyway? :(

Whatever Kon and the rest say, Nate isn't that creepy. Cause if Nate is creepy then Kon is too. People watching is soo stalking.

Aside from that, your story has different description. You describe most things with how Kon observes them, and i like it. :)

I wonder what's happening 'that week?'

I hope u r going to update soon. :)
4/25/2011 c17 Evelynns
awesome story! :D
4/20/2011 c17 strangledice
I love your story! Really, it's amazing. I love how Nate and Konstantine always interact with each other. ]

Great story! Update soon!
3/22/2011 c17 3mykonstantine
i absolutely LOVE this! at firs ti thought it would be like any other high school drama story but i love the way you incorporated something corporate into it, in ways that only someone who really loves them would notice, like the 11:11, the last name delaney, the fact that konstantine is so much younger than chris, stuff like that. please continue soon! :)
2/23/2011 c17 just another one
i usually never review but i thought i would this time. the reason i originally decide to read this story was because i am in love with the song konstantine by something corporate ever since i heard it. but the reason i kept reading this story was because you took the soul of that song and somehow incorporated it into this story. which by the way i think is amazing =D. i cant wait for the next chapter especially since this chapter did end with a cliffy. keep up the good work =)
2/22/2011 c16 Aphrodite's Antidote
I love love this story. If I came upon this before at the beginning I would have reviewed every time because I just LOVE it so much. Haha well there's me sounding like I'm sucking up but I really to love this and the plot line is great. I like how Nate and Kon have that weird well I don't know what words to use that exactly explains it but I'm sure you get what I mean. Well I can't wait until you review.
2/22/2011 c1 2tifferz92413
This is a really awesome story. I like the plot so far and the I love all of the characters. I'm excited to see how it will end.

I went out and listen to the song by something corporate and even though I generally don't like songs that are that long, I thought it was great. I can see why you would write a story based off of it because honestly if you weren't I would have. :)
2/21/2011 c17 apple
great chapter! update again real soon please!
2/20/2011 c17 ShootingStarsAren'tMagical
Wowza. I love it. Pretty please keep going!
2/20/2011 c17 Ema Marsel
Um no clue about the quiz but I loved the chapter!
2/19/2011 c17 25Kyllex
YAY FOR UPDATES! Yes, it was short, but that's okay. I liked it. I love love love love LOVE (did I mention love?) the way Nate and Kon's friendship is progressing. I thought they were NEVER going to cross that barrier. Haha.

I can't wait for more on the Max-Keats-Leslie love triangle. I still love Dr. Sanders. I still don't really like Carol all that much.

And the only reason I can think of why the title of that song may be important is because Nate and Kon and Chris and probably everyone in this story have their own "invisible monsters" to reckon with. Kon has Chris' death, Nate has his father, etc.

Blahblahblah. I feel like I should say more but I can't think of anything. Uh...I hope school gets less stressful for you; I can definitely sympathize with that! Although I'll be sad for such a long wait between chapters, I understand and I'm willing to wait for what sounds like an amazing chapter. ;)

Hope to hear from you soon! Keep it up!

-Kyllex
2/19/2011 c17 2THis doesn't even exist
Hey,

I don't really know what to say to this chapter.

It's super short, and you warned us at the beginning, but still.

It's not enough for me!

There wasn't all that much to it. Just an explanation of the last month, so there isn't a lot to review.

All this chapter did was make me want more.

sigh.

But I know that you'll take a while. And I totally understand.

I'm taking a break from writing until I graduate... only like, 125 days.

Not that I'm counting or anything.

Okay. I'm super tired, so I'm sorry this review is lacking. but I figured it's better to give a (sad) review than to not review at all. Because chances are I would put it off until I got into a better state of mind, and then I would forget.

But.

When I am in said better state of mind, if I remember, I will come on and take a deeper look.

Hope the fairies of writing will blow inspiration your way!

~Chelsey
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