1/16/2011 c7 Kyllex
I have many things to say about this chapter.

1 - I love love love Jessica and Konstantine's growing relationship. Even if Jess's pain isn't as bad as Kon's, it's still nice to know that they have each other and they are both going through tough times. I mean, yeah, getting cheated on isn't as bad as your boyfriend dying, but it's still pretty bad.

2 - How I Met Your Mother, COD, AND Chuck all in one chapter? I think I am in love with you. Uh...in a platonic way, I swear. Haha. Anyway, I caught the Agent Carmichael reference because Chuck is my FAVORITE show (closely followed by HIMYM). You are my new hero.

3 - The way Chris keeps showing up in the living room is kind of creepy. I know that it's just Kon's imagination (or is it?) but still. It breaks my heart a little every time she has to see him die again. And speaking of, I just really want to know how he died! But I assume I'll learn eventually. Haha.

4 - Why did Shaun leave Kon's mother? I know that Kaitlyn is a bitch and all, but Shaun just doesn't seem like the type to hump and dump, you know? Unless he just didn't know that Konstantine was going to be born, but still. I feel like it doesn't fit his caring character very well.

There was something else but I forgot. Good job, as usual! I'm off to read the rest!

-Kyllex

1/5/2011 c15 Ema Marsel
Fabulous story! I am intrigued and love it!

1/4/2011 c15 7WindLessNiteZ
wow... that was an amazing chapter it was shocking , saddening and just very touching :)

there are only a few story that can make me cry and this is definitely one of them . "sometime humans does raise up their self-defense a bit to high " XP

about your late update don't worry about it life is tough it's normal take your time plus a good update always require a wait but as long as it's a good chapter i think it's worth it ! XD

-thank you for the update and update soon cant wait ! XP

1/3/2011 c15 m
I love this story so freaking much and if you ever make me wait that long for a review again...iIdonno... but it'll be bad! As always your writing is superb, I feel such a connection to the characters in this story. I actually had a bit of a sob-fest because as much as I like Nate, I love Chris more. I wish he wasn't dead =[

1/2/2011 c15 2THis doesn't even exist
Fantastic as always.

I won't bitch you out.

I'm a little upset that it's short, but I'll live.

The only thing I'm not happy about is that I know that it will be forever until you post another chapter.

You are absolutely brilliant, and I mean that completely seriously. There's something about your writing that makes it special. It makes me want to be a better writer, for one, and it's engrossing, for another.

Even though I haven't read this since the last time you posted, and I didn't reread the last chapter, it's still clear in my memory, and I can still feel (just as strongly as when posts were regular) the emotions and connections between characters.

It's really amazing.

My favorite part...

It's a tie between

when Konstantine was describing how Nate was the kind of guy you could fall in love with at first sight. Because this is the first time when she shows that she thinks of Nate in that way at all. She says that no one would ever get the chance to, but she does think about it, which definitely says something, and it makes me happy.

And

When she says that he knew, and she knew, and he fu*king knew that she knew. Maybe it's just me, but I found that part humorous. I laughed a little bit. I was reading in my living room and my mom was like... are you okay?

anyway.

I love love love how Nate told her to stay, and how they had any moment at all. I've been waiting for them to have anything like that forever. I've been waiting for a post forever, but that's besides the point.

anyway. Once again, amazing as always. I need more synonyms for amazing, because I think I used them all in this...

I can't wait until July when you post again.

All (somewhat mean) jokes aside, I really can't wait until you post again. I hope you get inspiration soon. I do find it interesting that you don't find much inspiration at an arts school.

You're in San Fran. You could always go out to The Wharf (if you're close enough) on the weekend, and gather inspiration from the street artists. They're pretty amazing. And the water is cool...

Love it all,

~Chelsey

10/12/2010 c14 m
Please update! please please please im BEGGING you. Ive been reading the same 14 chapters over and over again cus i love your story so much. PLEASE!

9/6/2010 c1 WindLessNiteZ
-those who are able to speak out their past means that they are free from the chains of past but those who cant... will continue to suffer in their chain of past ... C=

-nate and kon seem to suit this passage XP

- well i think the plot ,sequence from the way you potrayed the characters are definetly one of the best here in FP C=

so pls do update soon !

XP thx for writing !