for Chroma11/19/2013 c30 LoverOfBooks
Hey there!
So I did not post any reviews on your previous chapters even when I saw your desperate pleas (Sorry!) but I was so eager to start up the next chapter I never got to review at all.
Oh before I ramble on and on pointlessly (forgive) I must say I LOVED your story,every single thing about it really.
Also about Chapter 30,I honestly liked its conclusion because it basically sums (almost) everything if you decided to not put up the last chapter just know I ain't mad at ya :-)
Again Loved your story to bits and I think if you published this it'd sell like hot cakes-I enjoyed it I'm sure other peeps would too.
Okay this is long so I'll stop now:-P
LoverOfBooks
Hey there!
So I did not post any reviews on your previous chapters even when I saw your desperate pleas (Sorry!) but I was so eager to start up the next chapter I never got to review at all.
Oh before I ramble on and on pointlessly (forgive) I must say I LOVED your story,every single thing about it really.
Also about Chapter 30,I honestly liked its conclusion because it basically sums (almost) everything if you decided to not put up the last chapter just know I ain't mad at ya :-)
Again Loved your story to bits and I think if you published this it'd sell like hot cakes-I enjoyed it I'm sure other peeps would too.
Okay this is long so I'll stop now:-P
LoverOfBooks
11/19/2013 c30 
1leavesfallingup
Okay... I'm a little lost. The first scene was from when she and Chris crashed? And if Kon's dad picked her up in another town, then how did Nate meet her at the group home? And finally, where is Nate going again? Somehow I feel like I've missed several important chapters in this story.
I'll wait until it is finished and then read the whole thing through, but, for now, I'm just a little confused.
The good thing is that Nate is moving away from his father. I was afraid that the man would come after him when Konstantine made Nate leave that night.
1leavesfallingupOkay... I'm a little lost. The first scene was from when she and Chris crashed? And if Kon's dad picked her up in another town, then how did Nate meet her at the group home? And finally, where is Nate going again? Somehow I feel like I've missed several important chapters in this story.
I'll wait until it is finished and then read the whole thing through, but, for now, I'm just a little confused.
The good thing is that Nate is moving away from his father. I was afraid that the man would come after him when Konstantine made Nate leave that night.
11/18/2013 c30 zaini
The chapters are too small.
Ur pulling them away from the reader too swiftly.
It's pretty hurtful.
I can spare both kon and naye privacy... But its too much.
Too quick.
Tc.
Thanx for an awesome story.
The chapters are too small.
Ur pulling them away from the reader too swiftly.
It's pretty hurtful.
I can spare both kon and naye privacy... But its too much.
Too quick.
Tc.
Thanx for an awesome story.
11/18/2013 c30 atran34
This has honestly got to be one of my favourite books on fictionpress, if not my favourite. The way you portray the characters and interactions are completely perfect. I love you for coming up with this book. Nate and Konstantine will always one of my favourite pairings ever. I really hope you continue writing and come up with something new. Thank you so much for finishing it up, totally made my week :)
This has honestly got to be one of my favourite books on fictionpress, if not my favourite. The way you portray the characters and interactions are completely perfect. I love you for coming up with this book. Nate and Konstantine will always one of my favourite pairings ever. I really hope you continue writing and come up with something new. Thank you so much for finishing it up, totally made my week :)
11/18/2013 c9 69Shadowswept
I am officially addicted to this story. Why oh why do I have to waste reading time by going to work? It's not fair. Anyway, before I finally get to that pile of dishes in the sink, I'll review this one last chapter for today. I love that she won't back down to that rude teacher! Dr. Sanders seems cool, so I'm glad she's in his homeroom now. You continue to flesh out all your characters with their own distinct personalities. Jessica, Max, and Jonathon all had memorable conversations here. Boy do Bryce and Tessah deserve each other! Yet they're both having a hard time letting go of Jessica. She is tougher than people thought. It's Nate, though, that continues to intrigue me. His reaction was unexpected and exciting. His reaction when he noticed Kon watching him was also interesting. It seems he wants to hide his emotions from her more than anyone. Curiouser and curiouser!
69ShadowsweptI am officially addicted to this story. Why oh why do I have to waste reading time by going to work? It's not fair. Anyway, before I finally get to that pile of dishes in the sink, I'll review this one last chapter for today. I love that she won't back down to that rude teacher! Dr. Sanders seems cool, so I'm glad she's in his homeroom now. You continue to flesh out all your characters with their own distinct personalities. Jessica, Max, and Jonathon all had memorable conversations here. Boy do Bryce and Tessah deserve each other! Yet they're both having a hard time letting go of Jessica. She is tougher than people thought. It's Nate, though, that continues to intrigue me. His reaction was unexpected and exciting. His reaction when he noticed Kon watching him was also interesting. It seems he wants to hide his emotions from her more than anyone. Curiouser and curiouser!
11/18/2013 c8 Shadowswept
I like the way you're fleshing out all her relationships. It makes the story so real. I know that when you're writing a romance it's so easy to focus completely on the couple and have everyone else in their lives be just an afterthought. You're not afraid to have some chapters without an appearance from Nate. I do like the way Jessica mentioned how alike Nate and Kon are though. It confirms what I was thinking. This chapter gave us more insight into her relationship with Chris, and to how different her dad is from her mom. I can't help saying it again. What a horrible mother!
I like the way you're fleshing out all her relationships. It makes the story so real. I know that when you're writing a romance it's so easy to focus completely on the couple and have everyone else in their lives be just an afterthought. You're not afraid to have some chapters without an appearance from Nate. I do like the way Jessica mentioned how alike Nate and Kon are though. It confirms what I was thinking. This chapter gave us more insight into her relationship with Chris, and to how different her dad is from her mom. I can't help saying it again. What a horrible mother!
11/18/2013 c29 Big fan
Please update soon! Been waiting all day Ahhh so excited
Please update soon! Been waiting all day Ahhh so excited
11/18/2013 c6 3ACleverPenName
..I usually review AFTER I read all the released chapters.. But..I've only read 6 chapters and I'm a BLUBBERING mess! The last time I cried this hard was when I read The Fault in our Stars..Yeah..You reduced me to a sobbing little baby..And I love it..
3ACleverPenName..I usually review AFTER I read all the released chapters.. But..I've only read 6 chapters and I'm a BLUBBERING mess! The last time I cried this hard was when I read The Fault in our Stars..Yeah..You reduced me to a sobbing little baby..And I love it..
11/18/2013 c29 7WindLessNiteZ
I was reading this during my mathematics class and when I reach the part on how Chris died I almost cried. (That would be really awkward since I am not suppose to be using my phone during class) xD
Moving on, :)
I loved this chapter the emotion was so thick and When you opened ' Jon's secret' you could say it really surprised me. Kon and Nate are just something else their relationship is so deep with all the underlying understanding and chemistry, it made me fall in love with these two characters all over again.
(p.s : if you ever write another story [which I pray to god above you will] I would definitely read it x)
Anyway thank you for this amazing update and can't wait for tomorrow!
7WindLessNiteZI was reading this during my mathematics class and when I reach the part on how Chris died I almost cried. (That would be really awkward since I am not suppose to be using my phone during class) xD
Moving on, :)
I loved this chapter the emotion was so thick and When you opened ' Jon's secret' you could say it really surprised me. Kon and Nate are just something else their relationship is so deep with all the underlying understanding and chemistry, it made me fall in love with these two characters all over again.
(p.s : if you ever write another story [which I pray to god above you will] I would definitely read it x)
Anyway thank you for this amazing update and can't wait for tomorrow!
11/17/2013 c7 69Shadowswept
This was a very emotional chapter. I think she's bonding with Jessica faster than she normally would because of what happened with Bryce. Their pain is actually bringing them closer. The flashback in this one gave us a clear understanding of her relationship with Chris. She was the dominant personality in their relationship. It seems more like equals with Nate. I am very curious about how Chris died.
69ShadowsweptThis was a very emotional chapter. I think she's bonding with Jessica faster than she normally would because of what happened with Bryce. Their pain is actually bringing them closer. The flashback in this one gave us a clear understanding of her relationship with Chris. She was the dominant personality in their relationship. It seems more like equals with Nate. I am very curious about how Chris died.
11/17/2013 c29 shann-ng
I am so so sad that this story is nearing an end but I just wanted to say despite the extreme gaps in updating that i have loved this story and you have invented and wrote a beautiful plot with characters that i feel so connected to and I hope you continue writing on FictionPress! And I can't wait for you to update later :)
I am so so sad that this story is nearing an end but I just wanted to say despite the extreme gaps in updating that i have loved this story and you have invented and wrote a beautiful plot with characters that i feel so connected to and I hope you continue writing on FictionPress! And I can't wait for you to update later :)
11/17/2013 c29 BIG FAN
Thankyou for updating! what a brilliant story :)
Thankyou for updating! what a brilliant story :)