for Chroma5/28/2013 c26 xiameesee
Hi! I read your story using my phone so I was not able to review between my readings. Well, since you loved reviews, I'm giving you one! :D Though I'm not good in reviewing...
Chroma touched my soul to the bone! The substance contained in your story is so deep and honey-spongy that my senses and my rationality (currently reading The Picture of Dorian Gray, awesome profound wisdom) were drowned. I love how the characters developed, especially Nate. He opens up so subtly that sometimes I feel like he's sitting beside me or even talking to me! Usually, I would deem a story good if I was able to engross myself in it. But this one, after reading, I thought, "I can't think of a story that can surpass this...' I don't want to read at all because I was afraid that I'd lose the feeling, the rush from this story. But then, I got tired from too much daydreaming, over thinking, and analyzing Chroma (well, Nate and Kon..) so I decided to read again. :)
All in all, excellent story author-sama!
(I can't log in t.t. but if I can, next time, I'll review again, looking forward to your next update!)
Hi! I read your story using my phone so I was not able to review between my readings. Well, since you loved reviews, I'm giving you one! :D Though I'm not good in reviewing...
Chroma touched my soul to the bone! The substance contained in your story is so deep and honey-spongy that my senses and my rationality (currently reading The Picture of Dorian Gray, awesome profound wisdom) were drowned. I love how the characters developed, especially Nate. He opens up so subtly that sometimes I feel like he's sitting beside me or even talking to me! Usually, I would deem a story good if I was able to engross myself in it. But this one, after reading, I thought, "I can't think of a story that can surpass this...' I don't want to read at all because I was afraid that I'd lose the feeling, the rush from this story. But then, I got tired from too much daydreaming, over thinking, and analyzing Chroma (well, Nate and Kon..) so I decided to read again. :)
All in all, excellent story author-sama!
(I can't log in t.t. but if I can, next time, I'll review again, looking forward to your next update!)
5/28/2013 c26 mgouda
yes! i can't tell you how excited i was when i saw this story update. it's been way too long, my friend.
the relationship between Kon and Nate is outstanding; well-developed, nicely paced, and so very...tender, i think. i think i mentioned something like this in another chapter review, but it makes me so happy that you've given them time to grow, that they get to know each other and develop at a realistic pace. i love a story that takes its time and doesn't rush, and this one sure meets that category ;p
and this new playfulness is so friggin cute. i was smiling practically throughout the whole chapter. very nice dialogue here.
as usual, i'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter...don't be a stranger this time, yes? lol
keep them coming!
yes! i can't tell you how excited i was when i saw this story update. it's been way too long, my friend.
the relationship between Kon and Nate is outstanding; well-developed, nicely paced, and so very...tender, i think. i think i mentioned something like this in another chapter review, but it makes me so happy that you've given them time to grow, that they get to know each other and develop at a realistic pace. i love a story that takes its time and doesn't rush, and this one sure meets that category ;p
and this new playfulness is so friggin cute. i was smiling practically throughout the whole chapter. very nice dialogue here.
as usual, i'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter...don't be a stranger this time, yes? lol
keep them coming!
5/28/2013 c26 
4Katie-Maude
I have been eyeing this story for a long time and debating reading it and I am glad that I finally did. I really enjoyed it and have been reading it non-stop for the past few days (between work and school). Konstantine is definitely an interesting character. Although at first I didn't exactly buy her whole ability to read people, but I am glad you kept it up through the whole story (I was worried that you wouldn't) and made it something that others do as well. I noticed a few minor typos throughout the story (not specifically in this chapter), but nothing major. I am really interested in seeing how Nate and Konstantine's relationship develops, while at the same time seeing what happened between her and Chris. I can't wait to see how this story develops.
4Katie-MaudeI have been eyeing this story for a long time and debating reading it and I am glad that I finally did. I really enjoyed it and have been reading it non-stop for the past few days (between work and school). Konstantine is definitely an interesting character. Although at first I didn't exactly buy her whole ability to read people, but I am glad you kept it up through the whole story (I was worried that you wouldn't) and made it something that others do as well. I noticed a few minor typos throughout the story (not specifically in this chapter), but nothing major. I am really interested in seeing how Nate and Konstantine's relationship develops, while at the same time seeing what happened between her and Chris. I can't wait to see how this story develops.
5/28/2013 c26 Antiqua-hime17
I love this story. I really wish i had there ability to read to people. I feel i could avoid so many upsetting events if i had it. Anyway please up date soon :)
I love this story. I really wish i had there ability to read to people. I feel i could avoid so many upsetting events if i had it. Anyway please up date soon :)
5/27/2013 c26 sleepingwdemons
I love, love, love, love, your story. It wasn't too fast paced and the characters are so genuine and believable that they make the story come to life. I can't wait to see Nate and Kon's relationship develop throughout the rest of the plot. There are so many questions that are running through my mind. Also, with the addition of Chelsea and the still relentless mystery surrounding Chris's death, reading the story is practically addictive. i hope you update soon! Love this story sooooo much!
I love, love, love, love, your story. It wasn't too fast paced and the characters are so genuine and believable that they make the story come to life. I can't wait to see Nate and Kon's relationship develop throughout the rest of the plot. There are so many questions that are running through my mind. Also, with the addition of Chelsea and the still relentless mystery surrounding Chris's death, reading the story is practically addictive. i hope you update soon! Love this story sooooo much!
5/27/2013 c26 4whatthegreencarrot
[I didn't see Nate again until a week later when Jon invited Jess and I over to swim in his apartment building's swimming pool] Should be "Jess and me," since (if you were to take the "Jess and" away) it'd be "Jon invited me over to swim."
[Nate had once leant me a book by some old surrealist poet and told me to bear with it] Did you mean "lent"? "Leant" would be to lean on something.
[There was a poster of a busty redhead woman in a bikini above it.] That line made me laugh. Of course Nate would have one of those in his bedroom; what else? I don't know what I expected of his room to be. Palm trees everywhere, I guess.
I really want to know more about Chris. All I've seen about him is that he did a lot of bad stuff and played in a band, and that he died. Presumably in front of Konstantine, although I'm not entirely sure about that, either. He's a mystery... O.o But, in that last scene in this chapter, does Konstantine actually "like" Chris yet, or does she really not know him well enough to feel anything but interest?
Anyway, glad you updated. That's a wrap. Thank you!
4whatthegreencarrot[I didn't see Nate again until a week later when Jon invited Jess and I over to swim in his apartment building's swimming pool] Should be "Jess and me," since (if you were to take the "Jess and" away) it'd be "Jon invited me over to swim."
[Nate had once leant me a book by some old surrealist poet and told me to bear with it] Did you mean "lent"? "Leant" would be to lean on something.
[There was a poster of a busty redhead woman in a bikini above it.] That line made me laugh. Of course Nate would have one of those in his bedroom; what else? I don't know what I expected of his room to be. Palm trees everywhere, I guess.
I really want to know more about Chris. All I've seen about him is that he did a lot of bad stuff and played in a band, and that he died. Presumably in front of Konstantine, although I'm not entirely sure about that, either. He's a mystery... O.o But, in that last scene in this chapter, does Konstantine actually "like" Chris yet, or does she really not know him well enough to feel anything but interest?
Anyway, glad you updated. That's a wrap. Thank you!
5/27/2013 c26 shann-ng
absolutely love this story, so happy you finally updated! please update soon cant stand the suspense haha!
absolutely love this story, so happy you finally updated! please update soon cant stand the suspense haha!
5/27/2013 c26 freedom2619
Could it be fate or maybe I am just lucky today?! I was just bore so I enter FP to see if there was an updated, and guess what?! THERE IS! I could not believe it xD...Loving this story so far, just wondering how long will be this story?
Could it be fate or maybe I am just lucky today?! I was just bore so I enter FP to see if there was an updated, and guess what?! THERE IS! I could not believe it xD...Loving this story so far, just wondering how long will be this story?
5/27/2013 c26 1ginger heart
This story is infinitely fascinating and even though I'm sitting in a library, supposed to study for my exams, I just had to pause whatever I was doing for a while and read this new chapter.
I adoreee this story, there really isn't much else to say (what a lame review, I know). Can't wait for another chapter :)
1ginger heartThis story is infinitely fascinating and even though I'm sitting in a library, supposed to study for my exams, I just had to pause whatever I was doing for a while and read this new chapter.
I adoreee this story, there really isn't much else to say (what a lame review, I know). Can't wait for another chapter :)
4/24/2013 c25 1Damned to heaven
Oh no no NO!
See, I usually check reviews on stories I'm gonna read so I can know whether the story is finished or not (sometimes authors forget to tick the completed box), I usually stay away from the unfinished ones 'cause I know I'll drive myself crazy thinking up endings when only the author can write the right ending, anyway I read this. Knew it wasn't finished, but I read it. Why? Because you write like how I want to write, y'know beautifully.
To read about fellow people watchers/readers is great, but Nate and Konstantine? I love the depth both characters have and how they know but don't know each other.
I adore music, and the fact you do too and have incorporated some great songs into this is pretty much the cherry on the cake.
I see you last updated this is January 2013, so it may be five months later but I'll still ask...update please?
I don't know what else to say, but yeah, wish I could write as beautifully as you do.
1Damned to heavenOh no no NO!
See, I usually check reviews on stories I'm gonna read so I can know whether the story is finished or not (sometimes authors forget to tick the completed box), I usually stay away from the unfinished ones 'cause I know I'll drive myself crazy thinking up endings when only the author can write the right ending, anyway I read this. Knew it wasn't finished, but I read it. Why? Because you write like how I want to write, y'know beautifully.
To read about fellow people watchers/readers is great, but Nate and Konstantine? I love the depth both characters have and how they know but don't know each other.
I adore music, and the fact you do too and have incorporated some great songs into this is pretty much the cherry on the cake.
I see you last updated this is January 2013, so it may be five months later but I'll still ask...update please?
I don't know what else to say, but yeah, wish I could write as beautifully as you do.
4/23/2013 c25 LadyRay
This story is unbelievable! I have never read a story with this level of professionalism on this site. I've become very attached to the story and characters, and would be heart-broken if you didn't complete this. It's a work of art, it truly is, and it deserves to have the best fucking ending you can give it. So please, please with cherries on top, continue writing! I'm afraid that because you haven't written in a while it means you're done. Tell me i'm wrong, because I and all your other fans need this story. You've incorporated a message so deep to stop now would be torture. I honestly think one day your books will be best sellers and I will go out and buy every single one. I admire you so much for your wonderful ability to write with so much emotion. You've blown me away. Thank you for writing this story, because you gave me the opportunity to read a real story for once on this site. There have been countless of times when i've stopped reading to fully process and comprehend the story and life in general. Continue this, it's a gift, don't let it go to waste.
This story is unbelievable! I have never read a story with this level of professionalism on this site. I've become very attached to the story and characters, and would be heart-broken if you didn't complete this. It's a work of art, it truly is, and it deserves to have the best fucking ending you can give it. So please, please with cherries on top, continue writing! I'm afraid that because you haven't written in a while it means you're done. Tell me i'm wrong, because I and all your other fans need this story. You've incorporated a message so deep to stop now would be torture. I honestly think one day your books will be best sellers and I will go out and buy every single one. I admire you so much for your wonderful ability to write with so much emotion. You've blown me away. Thank you for writing this story, because you gave me the opportunity to read a real story for once on this site. There have been countless of times when i've stopped reading to fully process and comprehend the story and life in general. Continue this, it's a gift, don't let it go to waste.
4/9/2013 c25 hopelessromantic0160
I LOVE your story. Usually I can come up with some constructive criticism to give to an author. In your case though, I can honestly say that I'm coming up with nothing. So, I'll just give compliments. I think that the way you incorporate Kon's memories into the story are great. I have read the works of no other author that does it as well as you. I also love how the entire story isn't completely based on Kon and Nate, but rather their friends too. Another good thing is that the relationship between Kon and Nate seems real, as in it's not girl meets guy, then falls in love a week later; Kon and Nate seem genuine. I do wonder about how you are going to establish a romance between them-if you even are going to-since they will be going to colleges on opposite sides of the country. I know that you hate it when readers nag you about updating soon, so I hope that I can phrase this differently: I hope that you are inspired to write another chapter soon. I can't wait! :D
I LOVE your story. Usually I can come up with some constructive criticism to give to an author. In your case though, I can honestly say that I'm coming up with nothing. So, I'll just give compliments. I think that the way you incorporate Kon's memories into the story are great. I have read the works of no other author that does it as well as you. I also love how the entire story isn't completely based on Kon and Nate, but rather their friends too. Another good thing is that the relationship between Kon and Nate seems real, as in it's not girl meets guy, then falls in love a week later; Kon and Nate seem genuine. I do wonder about how you are going to establish a romance between them-if you even are going to-since they will be going to colleges on opposite sides of the country. I know that you hate it when readers nag you about updating soon, so I hope that I can phrase this differently: I hope that you are inspired to write another chapter soon. I can't wait! :D
3/17/2013 c25 1M. Suzanne
Did the website cut off some of your story? It just doesn't seem like you wanted to end it there.
1M. SuzanneDid the website cut off some of your story? It just doesn't seem like you wanted to end it there.