6/19/2013 c1 Guest
So sweet!
So sweet!
11/26/2012 c1 5poopforbrains
Awghhhh. 3 Super cute oneshot. I love how adorkable Peyton iz. Cute guy, he is. :)) Anywayyy, I was hoping you could do a oneshot about Gage? His character is really funny and cute, it would be darn interesting to read from his head. LOL. Anwayyy, on with me reading more of your oneshots. ;)
Awghhhh. 3 Super cute oneshot. I love how adorkable Peyton iz. Cute guy, he is. :)) Anywayyy, I was hoping you could do a oneshot about Gage? His character is really funny and cute, it would be darn interesting to read from his head. LOL. Anwayyy, on with me reading more of your oneshots. ;)
6/11/2011 c1 18ManiacalByMoonlight
daawh. I love it! :]] heh. Nothing better than some good fluff past midnight..
daawh. I love it! :]] heh. Nothing better than some good fluff past midnight..
4/7/2011 c1 17Lady of romance world88
Hi. It is so beautiful story and I love it. :) I am wonder how old are Ava, Madeline, Gage, Mac and Peyton? *curiously* Aww Peyton have crush on Madeline for two years. How cute. :) I am wonder how long does Ava and Madeline being best friends for? *curiously* I am wonder what subjects does Mac and Gage study at college? *curiously* What type of car that Gage drive? *curiously* Does Gage and Peyton live with their parents or just single father? *curiously* I am wonder what happen to Mac and Madeline's parents? Are they at work? *curiously* Aww Madeline and Peyton kissed each other. How cute. :) I am wonder why Ava, Gage and Mac went off to store and buy eggs? What are they up to? *curiously* I wish this one shot story turn into short or long story. :( I am just wonder if there will be one shot stories of Peyton and Madeline? *curiously* I am wonder if you are plan to write Ava's story, Mac's story and Gage's story in the future please? Thanks. :) It is amazing story and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Keep writing. Don't stop writing. :D
Hi. It is so beautiful story and I love it. :) I am wonder how old are Ava, Madeline, Gage, Mac and Peyton? *curiously* Aww Peyton have crush on Madeline for two years. How cute. :) I am wonder how long does Ava and Madeline being best friends for? *curiously* I am wonder what subjects does Mac and Gage study at college? *curiously* What type of car that Gage drive? *curiously* Does Gage and Peyton live with their parents or just single father? *curiously* I am wonder what happen to Mac and Madeline's parents? Are they at work? *curiously* Aww Madeline and Peyton kissed each other. How cute. :) I am wonder why Ava, Gage and Mac went off to store and buy eggs? What are they up to? *curiously* I wish this one shot story turn into short or long story. :( I am just wonder if there will be one shot stories of Peyton and Madeline? *curiously* I am wonder if you are plan to write Ava's story, Mac's story and Gage's story in the future please? Thanks. :) It is amazing story and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Keep writing. Don't stop writing. :D
7/7/2010 c1 Ngoc1231
Aww this is adorable! Although when I think of Peyton.. I think of a girl because of One Tree Hill. But that is just me.
I love the story!
~*~Ngoc1231~*~
Aww this is adorable! Although when I think of Peyton.. I think of a girl because of One Tree Hill. But that is just me.
I love the story!
~*~Ngoc1231~*~
4/4/2010 c1 5amezz
Awh!:) That was so sweet! I really liked that you wrote from Peyton's perspective, not many stories that I've read are from a male's point of view, so that was nice.
I really enjoyed it!:)
Awh!:) That was so sweet! I really liked that you wrote from Peyton's perspective, not many stories that I've read are from a male's point of view, so that was nice.
I really enjoyed it!:)
2/25/2010 c1 13blurrylights
I was internally aw-ing throughout the entire story. :) It was so adorable! Madeline and Peyton are soo cute. :P
It was pretty good for your first time in present tense! It didn't feel awkward and all, and your banter was natural. Kudos to you. I can't pull off present for my life, haha. :)
Wonderful job!
I was internally aw-ing throughout the entire story. :) It was so adorable! Madeline and Peyton are soo cute. :P
It was pretty good for your first time in present tense! It didn't feel awkward and all, and your banter was natural. Kudos to you. I can't pull off present for my life, haha. :)
Wonderful job!
2/19/2010 c1 7Cassie Francesca Corday
Hi there. I find your story cute. But, if I'm not mistaken, the quote on your summary is from a song by Hawk Nelson? (sorry, not sure of the artist's spelling) and if it is, aren't you supposed to quote them?
Hi there. I find your story cute. But, if I'm not mistaken, the quote on your summary is from a song by Hawk Nelson? (sorry, not sure of the artist's spelling) and if it is, aren't you supposed to quote them?