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2/15/2010 c1 1TheOCDProcrastinator
chesy n swet:)
2/15/2010 c1 5Da PeanutButterMonster
FREAK'N HELL!

THT WAS SO DAMN FANTASTIC!

AH! MUST IT END?
1/26/2010 c1 1eskar
i really, really like shy quiet guys. Maybe not in real life, but the entire fictionpress Romance section seems to be filled with awkward girls and suave guys. This was cute. It reminds me of reality, haha :)
1/25/2010 c1 2xxcubanangelxx
Haha, I really liked. It was super cute. :)
1/25/2010 c1 nata
AW! I LOVE THIS STORY!
1/25/2010 c1 1TumbleWeed23
You have NO CLUE how creepily appropriate this situation is to mine right now! Except I'm Peyton and the guy i'm crazy for is Madeline..sigh...and i don't know if he likes me at all...in fact i'm a bumbling fool every time i'm near him so i doubt he does...and we don't have anything in common to talk about...BUT this was SO sweet. I wish my story ends like this...:D oh and i loved your writing style :)
1/25/2010 c1 14Beautiful Destination
Aww... this was so adorable. I love awkward guys :D
1/25/2010 c1 3Katie Valentine
So cute, some shy guys are adorable aren't they? Lol. :D
1/24/2010 c1 3BethyT
This was fantastic! Simple, but still amazing. I also think that you pulled off writing in a guy's point of view particularly well. You also get extra points for using the names Madeline and Ava. They're two of my favorite names, no lie.

Overall it was great!
1/23/2010 c1 3eamane
This is insanely cute! :)
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