for Asylum2/20/2010 c2 
2Lady Kiri
Hallie is a brave woman. What a way to treat a stranger who saved your life
The opening bathtub scene was very vivid. I thought along the lines of 'wtf?'(Good way) and 'this is interesting' when the water began to boil and lightbulbs began popping.
I'm curious to learn more about Edgar and Hallie
Until next time
Lady Kiri
2Lady KiriHallie is a brave woman. What a way to treat a stranger who saved your life
The opening bathtub scene was very vivid. I thought along the lines of 'wtf?'(Good way) and 'this is interesting' when the water began to boil and lightbulbs began popping.
I'm curious to learn more about Edgar and Hallie
Until next time
Lady Kiri
2/1/2010 c2 3naito-kun
gosh i'm so sorry i only got around to reviewing this now, anyway i love the whole revenge thing (haha am a sucker for stuff like that) but i'm a little confused about who hallie is O: and i loved the whole water and fire thing you did in chapter one.
3naito-kungosh i'm so sorry i only got around to reviewing this now, anyway i love the whole revenge thing (haha am a sucker for stuff like that) but i'm a little confused about who hallie is O: and i loved the whole water and fire thing you did in chapter one.
1/29/2010 c2 dfw
I like your way of describing things. It is certainly special from what I've read so far, really. I look forward to your next chapters. Love your work! XD
I like your way of describing things. It is certainly special from what I've read so far, really. I look forward to your next chapters. Love your work! XD