for Two Grand2/5/2016 c1 Guest
wowww. , that was um, something. Seriously though, I enjoyed it
wowww. , that was um, something. Seriously though, I enjoyed it
10/20/2010 c1 
150SpawnMeister666
I like this a lot. Well written, a good pace, and it shows what us guys have always thought of women deep down - they are evil when they want to be!
Spawnt
150SpawnMeister666I like this a lot. Well written, a good pace, and it shows what us guys have always thought of women deep down - they are evil when they want to be!
Spawnt
7/29/2010 c1 tell it to the sky
love it. its different from you other stuff but that makes it interesting!
love it. its different from you other stuff but that makes it interesting!
2/10/2010 c1 2Maria Camila Amaya Cabrera
i love how different the tone of this one-shot is to your other stories...very mysterious! :) kinda reminds me of the poem "salome" by Carol Ann Duffy. keep it up! =]
2Maria Camila Amaya Cabrerai love how different the tone of this one-shot is to your other stories...very mysterious! :) kinda reminds me of the poem "salome" by Carol Ann Duffy. keep it up! =]
1/29/2010 c1 Boo
hahah!evil:)
hahah!evil:)
1/28/2010 c1 3CynicalRomantic09
An interesting one-shot, to say the least. And your summary is very correct; it's not what you usually write, but it's still pretty good! It seems like this could be worked into a full-fledged story, but it does just fine as a one-shot as well.
One of the best things about it, I think, is the mystery you put in it, plus we don't even know what the stripper's name is. It kind of just keeps you guessing, which is great!
Great job on the one-shot!
3CynicalRomantic09An interesting one-shot, to say the least. And your summary is very correct; it's not what you usually write, but it's still pretty good! It seems like this could be worked into a full-fledged story, but it does just fine as a one-shot as well.
One of the best things about it, I think, is the mystery you put in it, plus we don't even know what the stripper's name is. It kind of just keeps you guessing, which is great!
Great job on the one-shot!
1/26/2010 c1 celine
OMG this was amazing!
OMG this was amazing!
1/26/2010 c1 AmritaChahal
awesome! loved the twist, noticed it was complete on the story info thing, why? it would have been such an awesome story, please carry on, i miss updates from u and this story isnt like all the others its not cliche (not that i dnt like a cliche story but a change is nice aswell) anyways loved it, and the main girls character!
awesome! loved the twist, noticed it was complete on the story info thing, why? it would have been such an awesome story, please carry on, i miss updates from u and this story isnt like all the others its not cliche (not that i dnt like a cliche story but a change is nice aswell) anyways loved it, and the main girls character!