for Two Grand1/25/2010 c1 
3craziebabe45
Oh, nice twist on the stripper business! Haha...it made me laugh when I got to the end. You kept it moving well and it was an easy read. Good one shot!
3craziebabe45Oh, nice twist on the stripper business! Haha...it made me laugh when I got to the end. You kept it moving well and it was an easy read. Good one shot!
1/25/2010 c1 23Hypa To Hell And Back
Wow that was pretty cool. I liked it. Certainly different but very interesting.
23Hypa To Hell And BackWow that was pretty cool. I liked it. Certainly different but very interesting.
1/25/2010 c1 MidnightRythm1990
Haha and this is a one-shot? This is could turn into a kickass (excuse my Spanish) story. Throw in a hot cop/dectective, a jealous bouncer, the crazy mom who knows her daughter's a stripper but not a killer, the best friend who keeps her secrets and maybe somewhere hidden in the background, a little girl. Give the stripper an innocent but deadly nature with a coy smile, and it's a golden ROMEO and JULIET where Juliet's a stripper with the Midas touch and Romeo's a illfated officer... haha sorry this was so good it got me onto a rant...
Anyways Brava Brava! Three cheers for Bree... as usual :p
Haha and this is a one-shot? This is could turn into a kickass (excuse my Spanish) story. Throw in a hot cop/dectective, a jealous bouncer, the crazy mom who knows her daughter's a stripper but not a killer, the best friend who keeps her secrets and maybe somewhere hidden in the background, a little girl. Give the stripper an innocent but deadly nature with a coy smile, and it's a golden ROMEO and JULIET where Juliet's a stripper with the Midas touch and Romeo's a illfated officer... haha sorry this was so good it got me onto a rant...
Anyways Brava Brava! Three cheers for Bree... as usual :p
1/25/2010 c1 1RaynaSadie
i read this last night like, straight after you published it because i have you on author alert Lol. I didn't have time too review so i thought i should now. I'm currently in ICT at school so if the reviews a little bit shit sorry lol (: Full court press is and always will be my all time faveourite story out of books and fictionpress works, and this is nothing like it ... I LOVE IT. Its different from everything else you've written.. it would have been good if you'd have continued it.. i was kinda shocked at the end because .. you built it up so well! OH GOD MR O'NEIL'S COMING AH TEACHER GOTTA GO (: keep at it ... any one shots orr sequals too Full Court Press?
1RaynaSadiei read this last night like, straight after you published it because i have you on author alert Lol. I didn't have time too review so i thought i should now. I'm currently in ICT at school so if the reviews a little bit shit sorry lol (: Full court press is and always will be my all time faveourite story out of books and fictionpress works, and this is nothing like it ... I LOVE IT. Its different from everything else you've written.. it would have been good if you'd have continued it.. i was kinda shocked at the end because .. you built it up so well! OH GOD MR O'NEIL'S COMING AH TEACHER GOTTA GO (: keep at it ... any one shots orr sequals too Full Court Press?
1/25/2010 c1 flowingypsy
I never expected that to happen, she's crazy but that is a good plan to make money. Are we ever going to see Bark again or is there another story coming?
I never expected that to happen, she's crazy but that is a good plan to make money. Are we ever going to see Bark again or is there another story coming?
1/25/2010 c1 hezja
hel i wasnt expecting that,, but well written xx
hel i wasnt expecting that,, but well written xx
1/24/2010 c1 8castiel89
OMG! So at the end of this, it completely reminded me of an episode of Criminal Minds! I love that show! And honestly, I wasn't expecting it to end the way it did! So congrats on making me go "bree wrote what?"
Short and entertaining. Two thumbs up!
8castiel89OMG! So at the end of this, it completely reminded me of an episode of Criminal Minds! I love that show! And honestly, I wasn't expecting it to end the way it did! So congrats on making me go "bree wrote what?"
Short and entertaining. Two thumbs up!
1/24/2010 c1 2silver sky memories
I loved it. it's awesome and definitely a fresh idea. the way you tell it is prefect. too bad we don't know her name. and that it's only a one-shot this definitely has potentional to be an amazing full-length story.
2silver sky memoriesI loved it. it's awesome and definitely a fresh idea. the way you tell it is prefect. too bad we don't know her name. and that it's only a one-shot this definitely has potentional to be an amazing full-length story.
1/24/2010 c1 RK96
wow. i didnt expect that ending. it was really good! totally unexpected and definetly shows girl power! alot difernt from your usual stuff which i liked. great job
wow. i didnt expect that ending. it was really good! totally unexpected and definetly shows girl power! alot difernt from your usual stuff which i liked. great job
1/24/2010 c1 AmoreJess
I really like this. I'd probably like it even more if it turns into a whole story..hint hint. haha Awesome job on this, well it's not surprising at all, all of your stories are awesome.
I really like this. I'd probably like it even more if it turns into a whole story..hint hint. haha Awesome job on this, well it's not surprising at all, all of your stories are awesome.
1/24/2010 c1 6summers-end
Woah, creepy. I like it. Especially the part with the "Would it surprise you..." The first question surprised me. The second question threw me and made me think. Isn't she ever worried that the backstage guards will see her leave with someone and know? Or has she done this long enough to know she won't get caught? How did she even fall into it? Man, I really wanna know the back-story on this girl!
Oh and we should talk soon about more beta-ing :)
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6summers-endWoah, creepy. I like it. Especially the part with the "Would it surprise you..." The first question surprised me. The second question threw me and made me think. Isn't she ever worried that the backstage guards will see her leave with someone and know? Or has she done this long enough to know she won't get caught? How did she even fall into it? Man, I really wanna know the back-story on this girl!
Oh and we should talk soon about more beta-ing :)
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