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for Morose Prince of Denmark

1/25/2010 c1 59Tranquil Thorns
I like your rhyme scheme, and the overall accuracy of the poem in regards to the play.

Some minor notes:

"Fight hamlet" - since this is a command and Hamlet is the character's name, I think this should read 'Fight, Hamlet!'

'mothers affection' should be 'mother's affection.'

Anyhow, keep writing. :)

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