for Man in the Shadows3/16/2010 c1 
1Anna Cate
What a beginning! You definitely have the reader's attention with that first line. What body? Who was that man? Who's Mindy? What's going to happen next? Great story so far!
1Anna CateWhat a beginning! You definitely have the reader's attention with that first line. What body? Who was that man? Who's Mindy? What's going to happen next? Great story so far!
1/28/2010 c1 him
wow that was cool! i'd probably say to just slow down a little, because everything seems to move quite quickly, but i guess you could say that in a positive way too! awesomeness!
:)
wow that was cool! i'd probably say to just slow down a little, because everything seems to move quite quickly, but i guess you could say that in a positive way too! awesomeness!
:)
1/26/2010 c1 May Elizabeth
This left me curious about what would happen next. It's nice to see you posting here again. I used to be Raven Tiger.
This left me curious about what would happen next. It's nice to see you posting here again. I used to be Raven Tiger.
1/26/2010 c1 1Briony Lancaster
It's interesting, your description creates a strong visual image, without being too long-winded. It's instantly more engaging than my story, I think I might have to try and follow your example.
I'd love to see more.
I'm sorry I couldn't write a longer review, I can't think of much other than "exciting"!
1Briony LancasterIt's interesting, your description creates a strong visual image, without being too long-winded. It's instantly more engaging than my story, I think I might have to try and follow your example.
I'd love to see more.
I'm sorry I couldn't write a longer review, I can't think of much other than "exciting"!