for In the Event of a Divorce2/5/2016 c1 random kid
oh my gosh this is precious 3
oh my gosh this is precious 3
10/7/2013 c1 
15Noellesco
I loved this. It was an entertaining read and the guy was such... a guy, lol. I was confused at first but by the end of the story, I was able to separate their two personalities and that's quite a feat for an author to have managed to pull off. Especially since you only used dialogue to convey the message across.
There were a few grammatical errors and awkward phrasing but it was nothing that a simple proofread could fix. And I do acknowledge the fact that you wrote it fairly late into the night.
Thanks for the great read. I thoroughly enjoyed it. :) Keep writing.
15NoellescoI loved this. It was an entertaining read and the guy was such... a guy, lol. I was confused at first but by the end of the story, I was able to separate their two personalities and that's quite a feat for an author to have managed to pull off. Especially since you only used dialogue to convey the message across.
There were a few grammatical errors and awkward phrasing but it was nothing that a simple proofread could fix. And I do acknowledge the fact that you wrote it fairly late into the night.
Thanks for the great read. I thoroughly enjoyed it. :) Keep writing.
12/23/2010 c1 3Cucumber-girl
That was SO CUTE ^w^
I was expecting it to be really serious and full of emotional turmoil and everything, but it just made me feel really happy. Well done!
3Cucumber-girlThat was SO CUTE ^w^
I was expecting it to be really serious and full of emotional turmoil and everything, but it just made me feel really happy. Well done!
12/14/2010 c1 gotcha23
CUTE!
CUTE!
4/15/2010 c1 tamii
So cute :) At first I was confused as to which voice was who, but after a while I could really see the two distinct characters. I like the fact there were no names, no descriptions of appearances - just the dialogue.
That last part made me go 'aw' too :D He's so adorable, haha. So anyway, a great story that is really quite amusing.
So cute :) At first I was confused as to which voice was who, but after a while I could really see the two distinct characters. I like the fact there were no names, no descriptions of appearances - just the dialogue.
That last part made me go 'aw' too :D He's so adorable, haha. So anyway, a great story that is really quite amusing.
1/29/2010 c1 4Arlia Stacy
I really liked this! It was really sweet, and practical at the same time. I love how, even though it's all dialogue, you still know what's happening.
4Arlia StacyI really liked this! It was really sweet, and practical at the same time. I love how, even though it's all dialogue, you still know what's happening.
1/29/2010 c1 24Ravina
This was so cute! I would write more...but it's early morning and I'm already running late for work.
Great job!
- Rebekah
24RavinaThis was so cute! I would write more...but it's early morning and I'm already running late for work.
Great job!
- Rebekah
1/27/2010 c1 LaLa
This was absolutely adorable and I loved it. It was so funny and I love the flow of this. The back and forth between them was great. I honestly did not notice any mistakes. This was a really good story.
This was absolutely adorable and I loved it. It was so funny and I love the flow of this. The back and forth between them was great. I honestly did not notice any mistakes. This was a really good story.