for Killing By Captivation10/23/2014 c11 Guest
Doesn't "pure" mean "virgin" in most cases, or at least include it?
Doesn't "pure" mean "virgin" in most cases, or at least include it?
8/2/2014 c3 
2auroraglider
Well, Paul does get right to the point, doesn't he. Great chapter. This story moves without any dragging what so ever.
2auroragliderWell, Paul does get right to the point, doesn't he. Great chapter. This story moves without any dragging what so ever.
8/2/2014 c2 auroraglider
Oh, goodness, that last statement that Paul made should have been eeire, or creepy but it actually made me think he was even hotter than the last chapter did. What does that say about me, LOL.
Oh, goodness, that last statement that Paul made should have been eeire, or creepy but it actually made me think he was even hotter than the last chapter did. What does that say about me, LOL.
8/2/2014 c1 auroraglider
This story is very intriquing. I like the main character, Paul already. You have given us, the reader, just the right amount of explaination as to the who, what and why of Paul. He tells his story in a very descriptive manner, making it easy to picture his world. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
This story is very intriquing. I like the main character, Paul already. You have given us, the reader, just the right amount of explaination as to the who, what and why of Paul. He tells his story in a very descriptive manner, making it easy to picture his world. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
7/28/2013 c30 DarkAngel1130
Wow...this story was definitely an adventure! I love how things always have a solution. Even when there's a possibility that things won't work out. But they do either way. And Paul and Mandy were definitely perfect for each other! I love how their chemistry worked so well with each other. And this might not be expected, but my favorite part was certainly where Paul glimpsed his and Mandy's future with two daughters. I think that was so sweet and adorable. I'm sure they made a pretty good family. I can't believe I've read three stories so far in less than a week! You're writing is definitely addicting, but I'm glad it is. I've learned so much from you! :)
Wow...this story was definitely an adventure! I love how things always have a solution. Even when there's a possibility that things won't work out. But they do either way. And Paul and Mandy were definitely perfect for each other! I love how their chemistry worked so well with each other. And this might not be expected, but my favorite part was certainly where Paul glimpsed his and Mandy's future with two daughters. I think that was so sweet and adorable. I'm sure they made a pretty good family. I can't believe I've read three stories so far in less than a week! You're writing is definitely addicting, but I'm glad it is. I've learned so much from you! :)
1/13/2013 c31 turtles0284
Omg I literally could not stop reading. Your descriptions are so awesome and I just loved the way you wrote. Paul and Mandy are so sweet together. I will definitely be reading more of your stories :)
Omg I literally could not stop reading. Your descriptions are so awesome and I just loved the way you wrote. Paul and Mandy are so sweet together. I will definitely be reading more of your stories :)
8/18/2012 c1 Angela
I LOVE your story so far :D Your descriptions are just so awesome and the plot seems super interesting. Can't wait to keep reading
I LOVE your story so far :D Your descriptions are just so awesome and the plot seems super interesting. Can't wait to keep reading
7/1/2012 c31 2Clouded and Instincts
Oh my, this story was wonderfully crafted. I really enjoyed reading this work of art.
I would really love to read your first published novel, but I don't have Amazon's e-book program. If you ever decide to start publishing with Kobo Writing Life (I've read a bunch of great self published novels from Kobo Books! It's my go-to for e-reading!), please let me know! I'll upload all of your future novels!
2Clouded and InstinctsOh my, this story was wonderfully crafted. I really enjoyed reading this work of art.
I would really love to read your first published novel, but I don't have Amazon's e-book program. If you ever decide to start publishing with Kobo Writing Life (I've read a bunch of great self published novels from Kobo Books! It's my go-to for e-reading!), please let me know! I'll upload all of your future novels!
3/27/2012 c14 R. Ficst
I'm going to do the smart thing and actually go to bed tonight. I'm loving the story so far, and plan to return to it tomorrow. Here's my bookmark!
I'm going to do the smart thing and actually go to bed tonight. I'm loving the story so far, and plan to return to it tomorrow. Here's my bookmark!
1/26/2012 c30 sarah.evangelina
Loved this too. (: my favorite is the werewolf one right now though. I love your writing!
Loved this too. (: my favorite is the werewolf one right now though. I love your writing!
7/17/2011 c3 Clueless
You have yet to describe Mandy. For example Paul (out of all the names in the world?) well he was looking at Mandy saying how she was so attractive because of her sparkling or something or another and I'm reading and am like "What?" are you gonna describe what she looks like. 6es we know she's attractive, but so is half of the world. What does she look like? Brown hair, blonde hair, blue eyes or even green eyes. I like to picture the characters in my mind and can't very well do that without knowing what they look like. My mind wonders, next thing you know I'll be imagining her with purple hair and antlers. C'mon, I'm dyin' to know! Please!
You have yet to describe Mandy. For example Paul (out of all the names in the world?) well he was looking at Mandy saying how she was so attractive because of her sparkling or something or another and I'm reading and am like "What?" are you gonna describe what she looks like. 6es we know she's attractive, but so is half of the world. What does she look like? Brown hair, blonde hair, blue eyes or even green eyes. I like to picture the characters in my mind and can't very well do that without knowing what they look like. My mind wonders, next thing you know I'll be imagining her with purple hair and antlers. C'mon, I'm dyin' to know! Please!
6/24/2011 c30 15Ice Bubble
Ooooh! I love how the ending gives lots of space for the reader's imagination. 3
Usually, the last comment for all your stories is the same 'Awww!' or "So cute!" which is all true, it's just that it may get boring. :) But in truth I just love all your stories, though some more than others. Anyway, I absolutely love them all. 3
15Ice BubbleOoooh! I love how the ending gives lots of space for the reader's imagination. 3
Usually, the last comment for all your stories is the same 'Awww!' or "So cute!" which is all true, it's just that it may get boring. :) But in truth I just love all your stories, though some more than others. Anyway, I absolutely love them all. 3