for Killing By Captivation3/13/2010 c9 
4Astarael-11
Aw, yet again cute chapter. I like Paul, he's good at heart but just a little confused as to what he wants. Well, not confused as much as not realising what he wants quite just yet.
Anyway, sorry about the blathering, it was a good chapter and I can't wait to read the rest.
4Astarael-11Aw, yet again cute chapter. I like Paul, he's good at heart but just a little confused as to what he wants. Well, not confused as much as not realising what he wants quite just yet.
Anyway, sorry about the blathering, it was a good chapter and I can't wait to read the rest.
3/11/2010 c9 zoba20
aww he likes her now ! ^^
but would the creator want to marry her?
thanx for the update
aww he likes her now ! ^^
but would the creator want to marry her?
thanx for the update
3/11/2010 c9 u wouldjustbe AWESO without ME
so...when he turns mandy in to the devil, than will everything bad on earth going to stop? like the disasters and sudden earthquakes?
so...when he turns mandy in to the devil, than will everything bad on earth going to stop? like the disasters and sudden earthquakes?
3/11/2010 c9 pbgurl
So what happened to her home is whats slowly going to happen to other towns, cities, etc...? Thats so sad :(
-Liz :D
So what happened to her home is whats slowly going to happen to other towns, cities, etc...? Thats so sad :(
-Liz :D
3/11/2010 c9 pinkeclipse
Thanks for the chapter! I can wait for her to decide to not do anything or fight to protect humanity.
Thanks for the chapter! I can wait for her to decide to not do anything or fight to protect humanity.
3/8/2010 c8 1DarkestOfNights
I know it's just a dream at the end, but that can't be good. I'm guessing she will wake up with a start...where did that saying even come from..anyways and I'm sure Mandy will have a lot of questions and such.
1DarkestOfNightsI know it's just a dream at the end, but that can't be good. I'm guessing she will wake up with a start...where did that saying even come from..anyways and I'm sure Mandy will have a lot of questions and such.
3/6/2010 c8 u wouldjustbe AWESO without ME
hm the thing is, will mandy believe her dream and accuse paul or will she just call it a nightmare? and did satan break thepromise to paul about turning human? so many questions...
good luck lady femme fatale's team! lol
hm the thing is, will mandy believe her dream and accuse paul or will she just call it a nightmare? and did satan break thepromise to paul about turning human? so many questions...
good luck lady femme fatale's team! lol
3/6/2010 c8 4Astarael-11
Uh oh, well it remains to be seen whether Mandy believes the 'dream' or not but the uh oh is definitely for Paul. I liked the dream though, it was well written.
I can't wait to see what her reaction to it is though. But good chapter!
4Astarael-11Uh oh, well it remains to be seen whether Mandy believes the 'dream' or not but the uh oh is definitely for Paul. I liked the dream though, it was well written.
I can't wait to see what her reaction to it is though. But good chapter!
3/6/2010 c8 pinkeclipse
Thanks for the update! How will he prepare her for Satan or is the dream preparing her?
Thanks for the update! How will he prepare her for Satan or is the dream preparing her?
3/6/2010 c8 zoba20
omg i want her and paul to be together...she probably dreamt about paul's creator :(
thanx for updating
omg i want her and paul to be together...she probably dreamt about paul's creator :(
thanx for updating
3/6/2010 c8 pbgurl
oh wow, so it seems Paul may not even have to tell her the truth since she just dreamed about it.
Good luck! I hope your team wins ^_^
-Liz :D
oh wow, so it seems Paul may not even have to tell her the truth since she just dreamed about it.
Good luck! I hope your team wins ^_^
-Liz :D