for Killing By Captivation2/1/2010 c2 Kitten Authoress
Bleh. I HATE Twilight. Do you?
~Kitten
Bleh. I HATE Twilight. Do you?
~Kitten
2/1/2010 c2 Stormie-Daze
No! Gr darn you for stopping there.
No! Gr darn you for stopping there.
2/1/2010 c2 u wouldjustbe AWESO without ME
haha i like your rants about twilight and michael jackson :P
haha i like your rants about twilight and michael jackson :P
2/1/2010 c2 pbgurl
“I am many things,” Paul replied, his voice low, “but I probably am known best as your worst nightmare.”
...thats creepy. heh. So I guess she isn't leaving that coffe shop alone tonight.
-Liz :D
“I am many things,” Paul replied, his voice low, “but I probably am known best as your worst nightmare.”
...thats creepy. heh. So I guess she isn't leaving that coffe shop alone tonight.
-Liz :D
2/1/2010 c2 Blackrain7557
I laughed pretty hard, the twilight commentary was funny as well as the wings quip.
Mandy just like Rob’s hair. (Like needs a d). Little OCD and that was the only thing that caught my eye.
Overall good chapter, obviously not a whole lot going on, but Mandy is a funny character. Course finding out the wings you are tugging on are actually real would put anyone off.
I laughed pretty hard, the twilight commentary was funny as well as the wings quip.
Mandy just like Rob’s hair. (Like needs a d). Little OCD and that was the only thing that caught my eye.
Overall good chapter, obviously not a whole lot going on, but Mandy is a funny character. Course finding out the wings you are tugging on are actually real would put anyone off.
1/28/2010 c1 
2Its.Not.Me.Its.You
i lovelovelove it!
cant wait for more!
please update soon!
your head must be filled with so many amazing things your always coming up with new stories that i absolutley adore!
have a good weekend!
-ifly*hugs*
p.s. i
2Its.Not.Me.Its.Youi lovelovelove it!
cant wait for more!
please update soon!
your head must be filled with so many amazing things your always coming up with new stories that i absolutley adore!
have a good weekend!
-ifly*hugs*
p.s. i
1/28/2010 c1 1DarkestOfNights
I like how this is turning out, an interesting concept and I'm sure it will turn out very well. The ending was really good, it makes sure you get comfy and ready to read whats to come.
1DarkestOfNightsI like how this is turning out, an interesting concept and I'm sure it will turn out very well. The ending was really good, it makes sure you get comfy and ready to read whats to come.
1/27/2010 c1 Evanescence's Love
I love demon like stories, so i can't wait to read your type of demons.
Kinda reminds me of this half demon, half angel thing my friend and i drew...
I love demon like stories, so i can't wait to read your type of demons.
Kinda reminds me of this half demon, half angel thing my friend and i drew...
1/27/2010 c1 u wouldjustbe AWESO without ME
new story! yay! lol this is awesome. i like your choice of songs. The Veronicas were my favorite last year, but i especially love Everything Im not by them but it probably doesnt relate to this stories plot.
new story! yay! lol this is awesome. i like your choice of songs. The Veronicas were my favorite last year, but i especially love Everything Im not by them but it probably doesnt relate to this stories plot.