for Killing By Captivation6/14/2011 c1 Gigi
If your story is going to contain religious bull, maybe you should leave a warning for the readers.
If your story is going to contain religious bull, maybe you should leave a warning for the readers.
5/31/2011 c30 
4Astarael-11
I think this is the last story I can read for a very long time unfortunately, I really must do some study! Your stories make that very difficult and I'm sure that this won't be true and you'll be hearing from me in another coupld of days :P
Anyway, sorry about the ramblings, let's get on to the story. I know that I read about a third of this story before and was even reviewing it but then got uber busy. The rest of it was really good though! I loved reading about how much Mandy and Paul loved each other, it was super-cute, especially what the two were willing to give up for the other.
I very much enjoyed it, it was good and the whole concept was really good. I think the description of Satan was particularly interesting. Not what I was expecting although I was expecting him to be handsome which you did state.
So yes, fantastic story and I will TRY and be good and study but we both know that's not going to happen...
4Astarael-11I think this is the last story I can read for a very long time unfortunately, I really must do some study! Your stories make that very difficult and I'm sure that this won't be true and you'll be hearing from me in another coupld of days :P
Anyway, sorry about the ramblings, let's get on to the story. I know that I read about a third of this story before and was even reviewing it but then got uber busy. The rest of it was really good though! I loved reading about how much Mandy and Paul loved each other, it was super-cute, especially what the two were willing to give up for the other.
I very much enjoyed it, it was good and the whole concept was really good. I think the description of Satan was particularly interesting. Not what I was expecting although I was expecting him to be handsome which you did state.
So yes, fantastic story and I will TRY and be good and study but we both know that's not going to happen...
10/14/2010 c4 Bite The Succubus
Ho? Nicely written. I enjoyed this chapter very much so. Mandy seems to have accidentally stumbled upon something bigger than she could ever imagine. Thanks for writing!
Ho? Nicely written. I enjoyed this chapter very much so. Mandy seems to have accidentally stumbled upon something bigger than she could ever imagine. Thanks for writing!
10/14/2010 c3 Bite The Succubus
Yet again, you know exactly how to end a chapter. Anyways, nice story. I'm really liking it so far. Thanks!
Yet again, you know exactly how to end a chapter. Anyways, nice story. I'm really liking it so far. Thanks!
10/14/2010 c2 Bite The Succubus
Haha, your good at writing the last lines of chapters. Paul's last comment made me smile. I liked the fact that she actually tried to borrow his wings only to realize that the were real, heh.
Thanks so much!
Haha, your good at writing the last lines of chapters. Paul's last comment made me smile. I liked the fact that she actually tried to borrow his wings only to realize that the were real, heh.
Thanks so much!
10/14/2010 c1 Bite The Succubus
Heh, I like how you ended the chapter. That last line made me smile. This story has potential. I shall continue on so thanks for writing!
Heh, I like how you ended the chapter. That last line made me smile. This story has potential. I shall continue on so thanks for writing!
10/8/2010 c30 1Bipolarised
hello
just finished reading the story and i must say i'm really impressed! i really liked how you fit the story together with no cliches and mild romance that does not go over the top. i really liked it. congrats on finishing it, i know how it feels to actually finish a story, extremely difficult.
bye!
1Bipolarisedhello
just finished reading the story and i must say i'm really impressed! i really liked how you fit the story together with no cliches and mild romance that does not go over the top. i really liked it. congrats on finishing it, i know how it feels to actually finish a story, extremely difficult.
bye!
9/3/2010 c30 LittleFeathers
I read tis story all in one go and it was amazing. Eerything about it I loved. I love all of your stories!
I read tis story all in one go and it was amazing. Eerything about it I loved. I love all of your stories!
8/17/2010 c30 jmr79au
Loved it! Like all your other stories, it was magnificently written and flowed beautifully.
A job well done. Keep it up.
Jo xxoo
Loved it! Like all your other stories, it was magnificently written and flowed beautifully.
A job well done. Keep it up.
Jo xxoo
7/24/2010 c1 Aradia Cloud
I know that I'm gonna figure this out probably in the next chapter, but why can she see his wings?
I know that I'm gonna figure this out probably in the next chapter, but why can she see his wings?
7/3/2010 c30 ILoveYouAbuser
I quite like this story! Definitely a lovely ending compared to some of my previous reads.
I quite like this story! Definitely a lovely ending compared to some of my previous reads.
6/29/2010 c30 1Ben Tramsami
My favorite line: "Satan was not a happy camper."
I had fun imagining Satan as a literal camper. You know, in cabins in the woods. And he has this huge frown on his face. It's so funny! I wish I could show you...
Anyways, the story was good and I quite enjoyed reading it. Thanks for your hard work!
1Ben TramsamiMy favorite line: "Satan was not a happy camper."
I had fun imagining Satan as a literal camper. You know, in cabins in the woods. And he has this huge frown on his face. It's so funny! I wish I could show you...
Anyways, the story was good and I quite enjoyed reading it. Thanks for your hard work!