for Twisted Game3/6/2010 c1 
8sealednectar
I really liked this.
The words you chose were perfect, 'orchestrated' and 'fillet' are memorable.
x,
sealednectar
8sealednectarI really liked this.
The words you chose were perfect, 'orchestrated' and 'fillet' are memorable.
x,
sealednectar
3/5/2010 c1 5Insomniac-in-green
that is awesome! :o
really really emotional and meaningful.
loved it
Insom-
5Insomniac-in-greenthat is awesome! :o
really really emotional and meaningful.
loved it
Insom-
2/8/2010 c1 81BedHead-RedHead
so deliciously colourful, but painful too. i luv the lines "slashing each other with double-edged swords...to fillet each other's hearts". that's so graphic without going to the extremes, but it still paints a picture. love the concept of the internal battle. great job! :)
81BedHead-RedHeadso deliciously colourful, but painful too. i luv the lines "slashing each other with double-edged swords...to fillet each other's hearts". that's so graphic without going to the extremes, but it still paints a picture. love the concept of the internal battle. great job! :)
1/28/2010 c1 166listen to what i've never said
I absolutely loved the last four lines :)
missed your work
166listen to what i've never saidI absolutely loved the last four lines :)
missed your work