for Fooling the world2/12/2010 c2 
4L. Valdez
I am very curious to see where this story is going. I can already see that there is going to be some very entertaining conflict between the two.
Oh, and I liked your comment about Hogwarts when mentioning the train, it made me chuckle.
Looking forward to your next update,
L.V.
4L. ValdezI am very curious to see where this story is going. I can already see that there is going to be some very entertaining conflict between the two.
Oh, and I liked your comment about Hogwarts when mentioning the train, it made me chuckle.
Looking forward to your next update,
L.V.
2/12/2010 c2 3A Dreamer Always
LMFAO XD I gotta hand it to her (Ava) I would have bolted the minute I saw who was sitting in the chair XD But anyways, good work! I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter^^
3A Dreamer AlwaysLMFAO XD I gotta hand it to her (Ava) I would have bolted the minute I saw who was sitting in the chair XD But anyways, good work! I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter^^
2/12/2010 c2 4notjustink
This sounds really good and funny. At first I was like: great, the girl's spineless, but now I'm all for it! They're hilarious! :)
4notjustinkThis sounds really good and funny. At first I was like: great, the girl's spineless, but now I'm all for it! They're hilarious! :)
1/31/2010 c1 3A Dreamer Always
I absolutely love this story! I hope you get the next chapter in soon!
3A Dreamer AlwaysI absolutely love this story! I hope you get the next chapter in soon!
1/29/2010 c1 1Reclusive Watermelon
I like this story. The characters are realistic and
the plot is off to a good start.
Hope you're planning to continue.
1Reclusive WatermelonI like this story. The characters are realistic and
the plot is off to a good start.
Hope you're planning to continue.
1/29/2010 c1 15 minutes to midnight
I'm really liking this story! Can't wait to see what happens next! :D
15 minutes to midnightI'm really liking this story! Can't wait to see what happens next! :D