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3SweetSarah2
You're brave for saying this in front of your class but I think it's good. :) It's very bittersweet. I loved the line: I keep in my heart the last words you said. 'Cause it's so romantically angst. Keep it up! XD
3SweetSarah2You're brave for saying this in front of your class but I think it's good. :) It's very bittersweet. I loved the line: I keep in my heart the last words you said. 'Cause it's so romantically angst. Keep it up! XD
4/22/2010 c1 eighttofive09
Ohh man. "Reize", you are such a good writer! This poem...all I can say is wow...I'll have a more constructive review coming your way later, after I finish gaping at the computer moniter.
Ohh man. "Reize", you are such a good writer! This poem...all I can say is wow...I'll have a more constructive review coming your way later, after I finish gaping at the computer moniter.
1/31/2010 c1 8sealednectar
Wow, this is really powerful and devestatingly sad. Favourite line: 'She never listens; that's why I don't cry.'
8sealednectarWow, this is really powerful and devestatingly sad. Favourite line: 'She never listens; that's why I don't cry.'
1/30/2010 c1 5Bryman
This was really, really good. And from your're note at the end I guess 90 percent of this was personal. That makes it twice as good. I find it extremely hard to write personal stories, let alone present them in front of a class.[ I can't even give a required oral report ]. So, overall, it was a good read!
5BrymanThis was really, really good. And from your're note at the end I guess 90 percent of this was personal. That makes it twice as good. I find it extremely hard to write personal stories, let alone present them in front of a class.[ I can't even give a required oral report ]. So, overall, it was a good read!