
5/7/2001 c1
30Shadonyx
Very well written. Excellent use of language and diction... spectacular imagery too. The feelings of desolation, anger and want are clearly expressed... very good, Juu-chan :)

Very well written. Excellent use of language and diction... spectacular imagery too. The feelings of desolation, anger and want are clearly expressed... very good, Juu-chan :)
5/7/2001 c1 Shino Tenshi
*sniff sniff* bEATiFUL! I loveded it! Masako you are sssssooooo great! =^_^=
*sniff sniff* bEATiFUL! I loveded it! Masako you are sssssooooo great! =^_^=
5/7/2001 c1 Cool McFrosty
Shino Kouen always writes beautifully, even though her work is a bit dark. I always enjoy her work, including this one.
Shino Kouen always writes beautifully, even though her work is a bit dark. I always enjoy her work, including this one.