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2/7/2010 c1 6letyoursoultakeflight
Firstly, I like how you introduce this, and that the character isn't the usual beauty etc. Nice =]

Beautiful women make my thighs flabby, my pores gigantic, my nose huge and my legs short in comparison to my stocky body.

- and you convey her thoughts so well.

And every day I repeat clichés to myself like a molested lullaby.

- love the way you write!

Basically I love how well you get inside your character's head... I can even identify with a lot of it =] And I hope you continue =]

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