2/7/2010 c1 6letyoursoultakeflight
Firstly, I like how you introduce this, and that the character isn't the usual beauty etc. Nice =]
Beautiful women make my thighs flabby, my pores gigantic, my nose huge and my legs short in comparison to my stocky body.
- and you convey her thoughts so well.
And every day I repeat clichés to myself like a molested lullaby.
- love the way you write!
Basically I love how well you get inside your character's head... I can even identify with a lot of it =] And I hope you continue =]
Firstly, I like how you introduce this, and that the character isn't the usual beauty etc. Nice =]
Beautiful women make my thighs flabby, my pores gigantic, my nose huge and my legs short in comparison to my stocky body.
- and you convey her thoughts so well.
And every day I repeat clichés to myself like a molested lullaby.
- love the way you write!
Basically I love how well you get inside your character's head... I can even identify with a lot of it =] And I hope you continue =]