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2/20/2010 c1 2Akako Yamanaka
Cute!
2/16/2010 c1 21Sercus Kaynine
Ha! What a fun twist! Somehow, I agree with Tori. Loving something bizarre with your mom is creepier than loving something bizarre without your mom knowing. Fun convo with the little sis as well.

"I knew now that she knew we shared an interest thereā€™d be no living with her."

Amen. XD
2/15/2010 c1 Anise Cary
I really like the sibling argument, it's so realistic. I can sympathize with Tori having been the older sister myself.

That was a huge shock for her. I hope you're planning on continuing with this story because I'd love to see how she handles talking to her mom about her writing, and their common interest in yaoi.

You're good with dialogue.
2/1/2010 c1 Sophia
I love it-and that's a big piece of praise from me!

My sister has tried to bribe me with cookies in exchange for cleaning, and you've described the panic of someone reading your private diary perfect-I would definitely feel that way if my mom ever got her hands on my journal!

It contains huge amount of cussing and snarky comments on almost everyone and everything.

And then her mom writing yaoi-major laughs.

Good job!

~Sophia

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