for Just Another Fractured Fairy Tale1/18/2011 c4 recycle rhymes
i like the words in parentheses and in italics. full of sarcasm, and it makes me chuckle.
i like the words in parentheses and in italics. full of sarcasm, and it makes me chuckle.
4/29/2010 c4 
14The Wilted Gardenia
Hey, I'm sorry it took so long for me to get around to reading your stories =)
I really like these. Keep writing =D
14The Wilted GardeniaHey, I'm sorry it took so long for me to get around to reading your stories =)
I really like these. Keep writing =D
4/17/2010 c3 4I see London I see Sam's Town
"nowadays we call
kissing lips on lifeless girls
necrophilia"
Not sure if "humor" is the right word here, but I liked reading this due to your fairy tale theme in this collection. (And so that-the fairy tale theme aspect, compared to 'real life,' necrophilia would be definite.)
I enjoyed the simplicity of this, though. I think, for this particular piece, adding more would be poetic excess. I could see another poem, though, that delves more into the details; however, this has a nice simplicity, as I said. (;
4I see London I see Sam's Town"nowadays we call
kissing lips on lifeless girls
necrophilia"
Not sure if "humor" is the right word here, but I liked reading this due to your fairy tale theme in this collection. (And so that-the fairy tale theme aspect, compared to 'real life,' necrophilia would be definite.)
I enjoyed the simplicity of this, though. I think, for this particular piece, adding more would be poetic excess. I could see another poem, though, that delves more into the details; however, this has a nice simplicity, as I said. (;
4/17/2010 c4 1Reasons Unknown
Wow. I really liked this. It's a very unique approach to our beloved fairy tales. :)
1Reasons UnknownWow. I really liked this. It's a very unique approach to our beloved fairy tales. :)
2/14/2010 c4 43Dante's Disciple
I love the skeptical way you write these poems, with that sort of 'no one lives happily ever after' effect.
The Prince haiku is very funny, sleeping beauty is genius with the witty comments in brackets.
The Cinderella story is most blunt however, I wonder how many women feel like that?
Great work, I liked all of them :)
43Dante's DiscipleI love the skeptical way you write these poems, with that sort of 'no one lives happily ever after' effect.
The Prince haiku is very funny, sleeping beauty is genius with the witty comments in brackets.
The Cinderella story is most blunt however, I wonder how many women feel like that?
Great work, I liked all of them :)
2/5/2010 c4 26Mirabella
Wow, expertly done! Wonderful style/format.
I like how you got to the heart of the fairytales, but now we need some happy fluffy ones! I like fairy tales!
26MirabellaWow, expertly done! Wonderful style/format.
I like how you got to the heart of the fairytales, but now we need some happy fluffy ones! I like fairy tales!
2/5/2010 c3 Mirabella
Too right! Ma ha ha ha! This amused me! :)
You're very good at finding something noteworthy and relevant to ridicule. :)
Too right! Ma ha ha ha! This amused me! :)
You're very good at finding something noteworthy and relevant to ridicule. :)
2/5/2010 c4 Sir Scott
Is poetry based off the Mickey Mouse versions or the real versions of the fairytales?
A resentment of the fairytales comes through in these.
~SirScott
Is poetry based off the Mickey Mouse versions or the real versions of the fairytales?
A resentment of the fairytales comes through in these.
~SirScott
2/4/2010 c4 fleur de l'est
I know, fairytales are annoying sometimes. She never even had a say in the matter, what a sexist happily ever after. They should have let her sleep & dream on..
I know, fairytales are annoying sometimes. She never even had a say in the matter, what a sexist happily ever after. They should have let her sleep & dream on..
2/4/2010 c2 fleur de l'est
This one is disturbing & hopeful at the same time. The first one is quite cruel, it reminds me not so much of youth being a mirror of old age, but old age being the mirror of youth. And the last one is somewhat bittersweet.
This one is disturbing & hopeful at the same time. The first one is quite cruel, it reminds me not so much of youth being a mirror of old age, but old age being the mirror of youth. And the last one is somewhat bittersweet.