
2/2/2010 c1
3DivenireLibera
This is WONDERFUL.
Brilliant imagery, sprawling passion, emotion into every line!
Really though. The first few paragraphs make me reminice about my own real, physical romance, and then as you seamless unfold the true idea and metaphor I connect yet again with that less physical romance all writers know.
Gorgeous work. Beautiful metaphor. Touching love letter.
I'm going to go read this again.

This is WONDERFUL.
Brilliant imagery, sprawling passion, emotion into every line!
Really though. The first few paragraphs make me reminice about my own real, physical romance, and then as you seamless unfold the true idea and metaphor I connect yet again with that less physical romance all writers know.
Gorgeous work. Beautiful metaphor. Touching love letter.
I'm going to go read this again.