for What is it?6/11/2010 c1 
9ThatLovelyDarkMelody
Amazing, funny and true and sweet.
Although if you ask me, stubbing your toe going to get a glass of water in the dark, hurts more...just saying :P
Keep writing!
9ThatLovelyDarkMelodyAmazing, funny and true and sweet.
Although if you ask me, stubbing your toe going to get a glass of water in the dark, hurts more...just saying :P
Keep writing!
4/30/2010 c1 79Doxie Doll
This has a ridiculous amount of potential. I can feel it dying to be tear inducingly awesome.
What I mean to say is, I think you should edit this a bit. Make it flow more and work on the word choice.
79Doxie DollThis has a ridiculous amount of potential. I can feel it dying to be tear inducingly awesome.
What I mean to say is, I think you should edit this a bit. Make it flow more and work on the word choice.
2/12/2010 c1 81Princess-anna57
Good job here, well written. Kept me interested until the end! Well done. Keep writing please.
~Anna~ ^_^
81Princess-anna57Good job here, well written. Kept me interested until the end! Well done. Keep writing please.
~Anna~ ^_^
2/11/2010 c1 3misz-c0nfuzed
nice xD
i love it.
you get all angsty wanting to know the ending just to find yourself laughing over something so true.
3misz-c0nfuzednice xD
i love it.
you get all angsty wanting to know the ending just to find yourself laughing over something so true.
2/4/2010 c1 37I am Lyhegnot
It was a glass of milk, actually. :]
Funny, then serious, then funny. Wonderful job switching tones.
37I am LyhegnotIt was a glass of milk, actually. :]
Funny, then serious, then funny. Wonderful job switching tones.