2/6/2010 c1 Hidden Flowers
She's highly original. And Parker is a sweetie. I was a touch surprised when he told her she had 'nads of steel. It took me a minute to connect balls to a woman. Oh, that sounded so wrong!

I am pleased that you finished your previous story. It's a good one.

2/5/2010 c1 1Jinxed Rogue
I see my heckling - I mean pleading - paid off. Hurray for Parker the no longer invisible member of Out of Control!

2/5/2010 c1 1ZeeElle
First off, I LOVE her name! Logan Rogers. Definitely a heavy hitting, powerful name for a girl and I have a feeling that it could become one of those household names soon enough. I was reminded oddly enough of when Sidney first met Rob/Chad, with both of them having an entirely wrong impression of WHO she actually was thanks to Lex, so I think I already like vibes I’m getting off this story.

I’m not completely sure what she looks like yet, but I have a feeling that will come through Parker’s second impression/encounter with her. So far, I do think that the quirky personality trait is working, but I think that you want to be careful on straddling the line between her being just a little off beat OR completely clueless, which wouldn’t be so comfortable to read about. But so far so good, because she can at least throw back as good as she gets.

And, Parker! My God, I think we all knew that he was a notoriously good looking, and a possible flirt, but I never realized that he had a straight up arrogant side to him either. Interesting way he chose to deal with the “vulture,” and one only wonders how soon you’ll have him eating his words. Strong start, good atmosphere, and I’m thinking that we’re all up for some light hearted fun after the emotional ride that was WiFi.

I only have one request, Avery/Ryan cameos every so often! I don’t think any of us would mind if that joint tour with Controlled Environment becomes center stage drama either!

Thank you for writing, and I look forward to this one!