for Close to the Vest3/13/2010 c12 MarieAnn
I felt really bad for Logan in that last scene when no one would believe her esp. with how Lindsey treated her. I wonder what the package is. I hope that she doesn't create trouble for herself in trying to find out Evvy's relationship to Parker. Can't wait to read more! Have fun in Chicago!
I felt really bad for Logan in that last scene when no one would believe her esp. with how Lindsey treated her. I wonder what the package is. I hope that she doesn't create trouble for herself in trying to find out Evvy's relationship to Parker. Can't wait to read more! Have fun in Chicago!
3/13/2010 c12 dust and glitter
This is entirely late ._. I think you've posted like 3 or 4 chapters since my last review? Haha.
Oh, dear. I smell trouble a-brewing D: Silly Logan with her assuming. Then again, I'm sure I would think the exact same thing were I in her shoes.
Great chapter, great storyy :)
Update soon,
d&gx
This is entirely late ._. I think you've posted like 3 or 4 chapters since my last review? Haha.
Oh, dear. I smell trouble a-brewing D: Silly Logan with her assuming. Then again, I'm sure I would think the exact same thing were I in her shoes.
Great chapter, great storyy :)
Update soon,
d&gx
3/13/2010 c12 chng234
i guess the whole band will be grilling parker about his relationship with logan
i guess the whole band will be grilling parker about his relationship with logan
3/12/2010 c12 Chiara
I really like this story, and I liked the ideas behind a few of your other stories, but what really bugs me is that none of your females (in the few stories of yours I've read) never seem to have any backbone. The men are total assholes to them and make them cry and be miserable but just one phone call from them and the women all but jump to do the men's bidding. It would be nice if one of these women would confront the guys or be mad at them and show it. I mean if I had been logan and thought Parker was cheating on me on top of him barely talking to me anymore - why would I do anything he told me to as if everything was alright? As soon as lindsey started to insult her I would have been out of there - at the latest.
I truly do like your ideas for stories, but sadly I usually grow frustrated with them because your female characters don't show a hint of self-preservation or righteous anger. Maybe that's just me and that's alright, but I just wanted to tell you what I thought. This isn't me flaming you, but maybe giving you a new idea? I'm not sure, I just hope you don't take it the wrong way.
I really like this story, and I liked the ideas behind a few of your other stories, but what really bugs me is that none of your females (in the few stories of yours I've read) never seem to have any backbone. The men are total assholes to them and make them cry and be miserable but just one phone call from them and the women all but jump to do the men's bidding. It would be nice if one of these women would confront the guys or be mad at them and show it. I mean if I had been logan and thought Parker was cheating on me on top of him barely talking to me anymore - why would I do anything he told me to as if everything was alright? As soon as lindsey started to insult her I would have been out of there - at the latest.
I truly do like your ideas for stories, but sadly I usually grow frustrated with them because your female characters don't show a hint of self-preservation or righteous anger. Maybe that's just me and that's alright, but I just wanted to tell you what I thought. This isn't me flaming you, but maybe giving you a new idea? I'm not sure, I just hope you don't take it the wrong way.
3/12/2010 c12 vio923
Why didn't Parker let Sam know that he was sending Logan to pick up a package? He told Logan that Sam would have a package for her. Not a good move on his part.
Why didn't Parker let Sam know that he was sending Logan to pick up a package? He told Logan that Sam would have a package for her. Not a good move on his part.
3/12/2010 c12 
6EmmaWoodhouse88
That was funny. The Lindsey girl is mean. lol. Parker's reaction is hilarious. I can't wait to see what happens next.
6EmmaWoodhouse88That was funny. The Lindsey girl is mean. lol. Parker's reaction is hilarious. I can't wait to see what happens next.
3/12/2010 c12 animegirl214
Thanks so much for this chapter! :D
whenever u have a story up, that is my all time favorite story at the moment, till it ends that is.. and then u have another new story! :P
i somehow knew u were gonna update today and even though im sick right now and have a stupid big headache, i turned on my computer and WOW! a chapter! ;P
thanks so much again! :D :D :D
Thanks so much for this chapter! :D
whenever u have a story up, that is my all time favorite story at the moment, till it ends that is.. and then u have another new story! :P
i somehow knew u were gonna update today and even though im sick right now and have a stupid big headache, i turned on my computer and WOW! a chapter! ;P
thanks so much again! :D :D :D
3/12/2010 c12 1Midnight113
Great chapter, I enjoyed it. I like how even though she had the opportunity to take a picture of Addison, she didn't. What a jerk that Lindsey was to her, I'm glad Parker set things straight. I'm curious as to what he sent her though, can't wait to see.
1Midnight113Great chapter, I enjoyed it. I like how even though she had the opportunity to take a picture of Addison, she didn't. What a jerk that Lindsey was to her, I'm glad Parker set things straight. I'm curious as to what he sent her though, can't wait to see.
3/12/2010 c12 2ShrimpoJewels
I never did like Lindsey...and I felt for Parker I would get so frustrated with the situation especially since she's been dealing with the doubt about Parker and she still doesn't know who Evvy really is.
2ShrimpoJewelsI never did like Lindsey...and I felt for Parker I would get so frustrated with the situation especially since she's been dealing with the doubt about Parker and she still doesn't know who Evvy really is.
3/12/2010 c12 Hey
Usually I love your chapters, but this one feels forced, boring and shorter than it actually is.
Sorry if that was blunt, but this chappie just doesn't measure up.
Usually I love your chapters, but this one feels forced, boring and shorter than it actually is.
Sorry if that was blunt, but this chappie just doesn't measure up.
3/12/2010 c12 zoba20
yay there she showed lindsey ^_^
but i wonder what the package is ?
thanx, glad u updated
yay there she showed lindsey ^_^
but i wonder what the package is ?
thanx, glad u updated