for A Heart Set on Love6/18/2017 c3 Guest
I really like this, it's not run-of-the-mill and both your main characters are very indearing idiots which I'm a sucker for ;)
I really like this, it's not run-of-the-mill and both your main characters are very indearing idiots which I'm a sucker for ;)
6/16/2017 c3 
3Fryvi
I thought it was a good chapter :) The strangers confused me a bit though because I kept thinking it was Keeley x)
3FryviI thought it was a good chapter :) The strangers confused me a bit though because I kept thinking it was Keeley x)
6/16/2017 c3 Guest
Love it! Next chapter please!
Love it! Next chapter please!
6/13/2017 c2 Fryvi
Nice! I liked this! :D
I think your description of him is fine, I actually have a clearer image of him than I have of Zack :)
Nice! I liked this! :D
I think your description of him is fine, I actually have a clearer image of him than I have of Zack :)
6/5/2017 c1 Guest
This is my first time reading this and I love it!
This is my first time reading this and I love it!
6/3/2017 c1 blackkitties
I wasnt here for the before the rewrite but what you have posted so far makes me really exsited to read more
I wasnt here for the before the rewrite but what you have posted so far makes me really exsited to read more
5/3/2013 c3 Anon
Ah, write more!
Ah, write more!
5/2/2013 c3 Aww
I realize it's been nearly two years, but please finish this story. I love it so much, SOOOO much, it's so good! Please!
I realize it's been nearly two years, but please finish this story. I love it so much, SOOOO much, it's so good! Please!
6/7/2011 c3 SwiftMemory
Thankyou so much for chapter 3! i loved it! especially the part where Zach is drunk and Keeley thinks hes doing a mating ritual and all! lmao XD I would be so embarrised if i were Zach the next morning XD
Thankyou so much for chapter 3! i loved it! especially the part where Zach is drunk and Keeley thinks hes doing a mating ritual and all! lmao XD I would be so embarrised if i were Zach the next morning XD
11/18/2010 c2 Twilight Fan
Please continue this story, its so awsome! PLEASE UPDATE! KEELEY MUST LIVE ON!
Please continue this story, its so awsome! PLEASE UPDATE! KEELEY MUST LIVE ON!