for The Hazards of Love4/21/2013 c1 Michelle
HAHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHH. OMG. :'D I love this story the way it is :) I like how everything's subtle and not completely clear because that just adds to it's charm ;) And I'd guess Aphrodite? As for brother poor Apollo. I love how you swap between two styles of writing. It's adorable :3
HAHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHH. OMG. :'D I love this story the way it is :) I like how everything's subtle and not completely clear because that just adds to it's charm ;) And I'd guess Aphrodite? As for brother poor Apollo. I love how you swap between two styles of writing. It's adorable :3
1/5/2012 c1 M0jojojo
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this! No pun intended. Great one-shot I thoroughly enjoyed that! Speaking of which, I thoroughly enjoyed Brier Woods, too, but it's 3am here and that story deserves a proper review, and not the ramblings of a sleep-deprived, up-to-her-neck-in-finals, human (debatable) being. Ahem. Anyway. Great story:D
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this! No pun intended. Great one-shot I thoroughly enjoyed that! Speaking of which, I thoroughly enjoyed Brier Woods, too, but it's 3am here and that story deserves a proper review, and not the ramblings of a sleep-deprived, up-to-her-neck-in-finals, human (debatable) being. Ahem. Anyway. Great story:D
5/20/2011 c1 
1undergrounddaydreams
Awww..that was sweet and pretty darn cool. Cupid falls in love with the coffee shop girl, and he's a cute boy on top of that. Fun story. I like that the coffee and the glowing and the love was all warm to contrast the chilly weather. :)
1undergrounddaydreamsAwww..that was sweet and pretty darn cool. Cupid falls in love with the coffee shop girl, and he's a cute boy on top of that. Fun story. I like that the coffee and the glowing and the love was all warm to contrast the chilly weather. :)
4/23/2011 c1 4quotata
The conversations between gods at the beginning and end gave it a very interesting feel. it was almost like a movie voice over.
Great short story! =)
4quotataThe conversations between gods at the beginning and end gave it a very interesting feel. it was almost like a movie voice over.
Great short story! =)
2/5/2011 c1 nagasasu
Squee, this is just too cute. Really nice modern adaptation of the mythology too. And I liked the coffee shop setting.
Squee, this is just too cute. Really nice modern adaptation of the mythology too. And I liked the coffee shop setting.
1/19/2011 c1 7x.betweenthelines
Hi, I really liked this oneshot! The concept was great. You probably could have drawn out the ending a bit more but this was still great. I especially loved your characters.
7x.betweenthelinesHi, I really liked this oneshot! The concept was great. You probably could have drawn out the ending a bit more but this was still great. I especially loved your characters.
9/3/2010 c1 CaRiNeSs
This was really cute... I loved it... I read a review that said that they wish there was a bit more of an obvious ending for the pair and I couldn't agree more. I get that it just kinda happened and I loved how he got poked by the arrow but I wish there was just a little bit more of a conclusion to wrap it up. Or you could even make this into more of a story...you obviously don't want to since you just did a one shot but I thought it was clever and loved it! Great story :)
This was really cute... I loved it... I read a review that said that they wish there was a bit more of an obvious ending for the pair and I couldn't agree more. I get that it just kinda happened and I loved how he got poked by the arrow but I wish there was just a little bit more of a conclusion to wrap it up. Or you could even make this into more of a story...you obviously don't want to since you just did a one shot but I thought it was clever and loved it! Great story :)
8/1/2010 c1 20LetoSai
Oh, i loved this so much. ^_^ I found it amusing to some reason and was almost racing to get to the end to find out what happened. Was perfect.
20LetoSaiOh, i loved this so much. ^_^ I found it amusing to some reason and was almost racing to get to the end to find out what happened. Was perfect.
2/26/2010 c1 5christinaxxyo
This was really cute and creative. I thought it could have been a little bit more descriptive and maybe had a more obvious ending because I felt like you left the reader hanging. Besides that, however, I really liked the way you wrote this and the idea :)
5christinaxxyoThis was really cute and creative. I thought it could have been a little bit more descriptive and maybe had a more obvious ending because I felt like you left the reader hanging. Besides that, however, I really liked the way you wrote this and the idea :)