for We Are Infinite5/26/2014 c1 MusicLover21
*jaw drops* Oh. My. Freaking. God. That was completely and utterly amazing. I can't even describe how I'm even feeling right now.
*jaw drops* Oh. My. Freaking. God. That was completely and utterly amazing. I can't even describe how I'm even feeling right now.
2/12/2014 c1 Guest
Pathetic that she went back to him. This story sucks
Pathetic that she went back to him. This story sucks
3/17/2013 c1 Aeris.Lockheart507
I loved it! It makes me wonder if love as strong as theirs really exists.
I loved it! It makes me wonder if love as strong as theirs really exists.
2/3/2011 c1 Nemesis
Fuck u 2!
Fuck u 2!
11/16/2010 c1 
3HPRK08
I.. just.. wow. This was fucking GOOD. I dunno, I was just crying throughout, and well, I hate to think of it, but I've been in a similar situation. 'Is he proud of that? Surely he must be, for it takes a lot of influence to make someone think of that. He's in control. He must adore it.' That line especially made be sob harder than ever because well, I was in John's situation. But let me tell you, that is NOT what I felt. That was, for lack of better wording, what made it hurt more than ever. Did that make sense? Not sure, but seriously, this is damn good stuff. It's a difficult place to be in, that. Well done, amazing, absolutely brilliant stuff.
~hprk
3HPRK08I.. just.. wow. This was fucking GOOD. I dunno, I was just crying throughout, and well, I hate to think of it, but I've been in a similar situation. 'Is he proud of that? Surely he must be, for it takes a lot of influence to make someone think of that. He's in control. He must adore it.' That line especially made be sob harder than ever because well, I was in John's situation. But let me tell you, that is NOT what I felt. That was, for lack of better wording, what made it hurt more than ever. Did that make sense? Not sure, but seriously, this is damn good stuff. It's a difficult place to be in, that. Well done, amazing, absolutely brilliant stuff.
~hprk
10/3/2010 c1 Jhaynee
This was absolutely amazing. The depth of the words you used, the maturity of the language, the phrases used, the emotion underlying all of this. Oh my gosh, some parts nearly brought me to tears. So. Good.
This was absolutely amazing. The depth of the words you used, the maturity of the language, the phrases used, the emotion underlying all of this. Oh my gosh, some parts nearly brought me to tears. So. Good.
9/29/2010 c1 StarsShine
Liked it. A perfect balance between fluff and angst. But WHY THE FUCK DID JOHN KISS SYLVIA? I swear I wanted to kill him when he said " I didn't really know why I did that". Jeez there is NOT even a single reason why he cheated? Anyways, besides the fact Hailie took him back too easily, it was great. Very well written. I wish you'd write longer stories. And Fanfictions (since I'm mostly dwelling in the section). You'd be awesome. xD Okay this ranting is getting ridiculous. Can't wait for more oneshots/stories!
Liked it. A perfect balance between fluff and angst. But WHY THE FUCK DID JOHN KISS SYLVIA? I swear I wanted to kill him when he said " I didn't really know why I did that". Jeez there is NOT even a single reason why he cheated? Anyways, besides the fact Hailie took him back too easily, it was great. Very well written. I wish you'd write longer stories. And Fanfictions (since I'm mostly dwelling in the section). You'd be awesome. xD Okay this ranting is getting ridiculous. Can't wait for more oneshots/stories!
5/30/2010 c1 9IHateMyLoveLife
I like this. Somehow you managed to combine a normal person's voice with the wonderfully descriptive style.
The only thing I had trouble with is the ending. The very last sentence: "My God, I love you so much," he breathes, then takes my face in one of his hands and wraps one arm back around my waist.
It just left me wanting closure. It felt like you didn't finish wrapping that scene just yet.
Wonderfully well written.
9IHateMyLoveLifeI like this. Somehow you managed to combine a normal person's voice with the wonderfully descriptive style.
The only thing I had trouble with is the ending. The very last sentence: "My God, I love you so much," he breathes, then takes my face in one of his hands and wraps one arm back around my waist.
It just left me wanting closure. It felt like you didn't finish wrapping that scene just yet.
Wonderfully well written.
3/12/2010 c1 9j.c-chic
what he did.. i didn't like how she took him back so quickly...
um.. so i'm guessing that your 'fuck you' remark was directed at me then..? :(
9j.c-chicwhat he did.. i didn't like how she took him back so quickly...
um.. so i'm guessing that your 'fuck you' remark was directed at me then..? :(
2/12/2010 c1 Larissa
nice story. love it
nice story. love it
2/9/2010 c1 2ZaraRose.16
Aw! There were a few spelling mistakes and repetitions but I was so lost within the story I didn't really care! Aw!
Haha, love it!
Zara xoxox
2ZaraRose.16Aw! There were a few spelling mistakes and repetitions but I was so lost within the story I didn't really care! Aw!
Haha, love it!
Zara xoxox
2/7/2010 c1 AmritaChahal
this is so cute but im sorry i dnt care how much she loves him, wtf did he kiss sylvia then?
however opposed to it, still love it!
this is so cute but im sorry i dnt care how much she loves him, wtf did he kiss sylvia then?
however opposed to it, still love it!
2/7/2010 c1 1RaynaSadie
i realy want to know what the hell was going through Johns head when he kissed Sylvia ¬¬ lol. AND why the flip didn't hailie just forgive him straight away? .. well not straight away but if he was soo persistant and sexy .. how could you not xD i actually really like this (: .. might just add it to my faveourites .. oh and are you continuing StepLover? because i am totally in love with that story :) lol
1RaynaSadiei realy want to know what the hell was going through Johns head when he kissed Sylvia ¬¬ lol. AND why the flip didn't hailie just forgive him straight away? .. well not straight away but if he was soo persistant and sexy .. how could you not xD i actually really like this (: .. might just add it to my faveourites .. oh and are you continuing StepLover? because i am totally in love with that story :) lol
2/6/2010 c1 3Medusa's.Protege
I like it! But the weird thing is, every word stuck to me. Like I know her pain. When she was heartbroken, I felt horrible. I felt like I was in her shoes. But it's never happened to me before...
3Medusa's.ProtegeI like it! But the weird thing is, every word stuck to me. Like I know her pain. When she was heartbroken, I felt horrible. I felt like I was in her shoes. But it's never happened to me before...