
2/6/2010 c1
13Aaerie
oh my god i love it can u do like a two shot and the second chap in guys poov just a suggestion

oh my god i love it can u do like a two shot and the second chap in guys poov just a suggestion
2/6/2010 c1 djkad
yur paragraphs are too long. space em out here and there, it stresses teh eyes.
yur paragraphs are too long. space em out here and there, it stresses teh eyes.