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6/6/2010 c1 13Irish Eyes 63
This was fantastic. Really. It was a beautiful metophor played out to the very end. Amazing symbolism too.

This poem was more of... one that speaks to the reader. All the words that you had written down just played through my mind and those really are the peoms that are going to stay through with people for a very long time to come.

I hope you keep writing, you are a fabulous writer when it comes to peoms. (:
5/12/2010 c1 99Dreamers-Requiem
Lovely poem - really nice metaphor, too. :)
2/7/2010 c1 16mizgardenia21
This was a gorgeous piece, the imagery literally flies off the page-er computer screen. This was lovely. Thank you for sharing.

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