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2/8/2010 c1 18Aoide Mnemosyne
Cool, a re-write! I meant to review this yesterday, but my computer grew angry with my swearing at it and refused to let me review. *huffs*

BUT! Now! Review! Time!

Very, very different from the first version. I like it, and I like Lexi, but it seemed much less detailed, and much less personal than your first version. Lexi mentions that other boys weren't like him that his age, but she never says what exactly that age was, which makes it a tad confusing.

In any case, I look forward to more :)!

~Sophia

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