2/9/2010 c1 AwakenedDreams
Oh wow...this is good. This is real good.

FAVORITES! Haha.

This, honestly, was just outstanding. The plot was in order, I understood the setting. I understood their personality and their emotions. It was like I was there with them.

I think maybe you should explain their appearance a little bit better, but other then that it was great; just terrific.

Keep up the good work. :)

-AD