for The Crow2/14/2010 c1 
19Eternal Skies
Wow. The imagery is amazing. You easily draw the image of a plush-green feild and lovely blue skies and a boy playing in the feild.
I read many stories with crows (it's all because of Mr.Poe -_-) but I find this one my favorite. It's so creepy and beautiful at the same time. Plus you didn't need lots of bottles of ketchup (almost non) to make us scared.
Great job~
19Eternal SkiesWow. The imagery is amazing. You easily draw the image of a plush-green feild and lovely blue skies and a boy playing in the feild.
I read many stories with crows (it's all because of Mr.Poe -_-) but I find this one my favorite. It's so creepy and beautiful at the same time. Plus you didn't need lots of bottles of ketchup (almost non) to make us scared.
Great job~
2/10/2010 c1 Khazkhaz
This was vivid, intriguing and damn creepy. Brilliant writing and descriptions, however your tense switches from past to present.
This was vivid, intriguing and damn creepy. Brilliant writing and descriptions, however your tense switches from past to present.