for Thieves of Samurett9/20/2010 c2 PhyreLillie
Hey naffs - okay, so I have like two bars right now, so thats why im able to catch a connection...
I promised you I was gonna review, and I still am - I'm just writing my reviews separately so I can post it all at once so the connection doesn't cut out in the middle of a review. So that's why I haven't reviewed yet...
I miss you. Alot. Haven't heard from you in a while, but hopefulli that'll change soon :)
Next month we should be getting internet again, but until then I'm stuck suffering from TWA/MSN withdrawals o.O
Miss you dearest. Still waiting for yo email :)
Hey naffs - okay, so I have like two bars right now, so thats why im able to catch a connection...
I promised you I was gonna review, and I still am - I'm just writing my reviews separately so I can post it all at once so the connection doesn't cut out in the middle of a review. So that's why I haven't reviewed yet...
I miss you. Alot. Haven't heard from you in a while, but hopefulli that'll change soon :)
Next month we should be getting internet again, but until then I'm stuck suffering from TWA/MSN withdrawals o.O
Miss you dearest. Still waiting for yo email :)
9/5/2010 c4 Asian.Gal16
Hi, thank you for updating :) Good chapter. I actually find Polly intresting & the boys are just soo mysterious..
Can't wait for more!
x
Hi, thank you for updating :) Good chapter. I actually find Polly intresting & the boys are just soo mysterious..
Can't wait for more!
x
9/5/2010 c4 LIPS
Ah, and so it only gets more interesting. I'm confused as hell, but I've learned to expect that with your stories. At least with this one I'm only slightly confused, and not abandoned in the middle of a labyrinth, naked and cold and hungry. :P
I'm so excited that you've got this story finished (or mostly finished, iswhatIthinkyousaid?). Hopefully it means quicker updates. But then again, I waited a couple years for Predator, so I think I can stick it out another few for this. Or any story of yours, actually.
Mkay. Gonna leave you alone now.
LIPS
Ah, and so it only gets more interesting. I'm confused as hell, but I've learned to expect that with your stories. At least with this one I'm only slightly confused, and not abandoned in the middle of a labyrinth, naked and cold and hungry. :P
I'm so excited that you've got this story finished (or mostly finished, iswhatIthinkyousaid?). Hopefully it means quicker updates. But then again, I waited a couple years for Predator, so I think I can stick it out another few for this. Or any story of yours, actually.
Mkay. Gonna leave you alone now.
LIPS
9/5/2010 c3 LIPS
I have a little ol' question... How old is Polly? In the first chapter I thought she was in her late teens, but these two past chapters have left me thinking she's younger. Like fourteen or so. I'm probably way off and you've probably already cleared this up, so I'll go back and read through it again.
Nice action in this chapter. Not that the other two didn't have action, but it felt like we got to meet some of the important characters in this one. Not that Polly and Timothy and her mom and them aren't important, I'm sure. lol You know what I mean.
Great stuff, as always. You never cease to make me jealous. It'snotgoodformyhealth.
LIPS
I have a little ol' question... How old is Polly? In the first chapter I thought she was in her late teens, but these two past chapters have left me thinking she's younger. Like fourteen or so. I'm probably way off and you've probably already cleared this up, so I'll go back and read through it again.
Nice action in this chapter. Not that the other two didn't have action, but it felt like we got to meet some of the important characters in this one. Not that Polly and Timothy and her mom and them aren't important, I'm sure. lol You know what I mean.
Great stuff, as always. You never cease to make me jealous. It'snotgoodformyhealth.
LIPS
9/5/2010 c2 LIPS
Ooh, very interesting. And flawlessly written as usual. I love Polly/Gwyntallia(sp?)'s character so far, and I'm curious about Caleb and the blond boy. So now I'll just be moseying on over to the next chapter.
LIPS
Ooh, very interesting. And flawlessly written as usual. I love Polly/Gwyntallia(sp?)'s character so far, and I'm curious about Caleb and the blond boy. So now I'll just be moseying on over to the next chapter.
LIPS
9/4/2010 c4 superficialowl
I am now officially hooked on this story. I like that you have introduced the characters gradually, otherwise they tend to get confusing. Can't wait for the next update.
I am now officially hooked on this story. I like that you have introduced the characters gradually, otherwise they tend to get confusing. Can't wait for the next update.
9/4/2010 c1 Flower-in-the-Night
Hehe naffi tis moi, I thought I'd read your first chapter. I must say it was quite intriguing lol how come she kept switching places? was she imagining it or something? or does she have supernatural powers? That wierd apparition of Heath or whatever his name was, was hot meow *waggles eyebrows* is there a fling going on with heath and this thing? Or is it just Heaths alter ego or his 'corrup
Hehe naffi tis moi, I thought I'd read your first chapter. I must say it was quite intriguing lol how come she kept switching places? was she imagining it or something? or does she have supernatural powers? That wierd apparition of Heath or whatever his name was, was hot meow *waggles eyebrows* is there a fling going on with heath and this thing? Or is it just Heaths alter ego or his 'corrup
9/4/2010 c1 LIPS
First off, I feel bad that it took me so long to get to read this. I'mreallyreallysorry; it couldn't be helped.
This is quite fascinating so far. I'm really not one for fantasy stories, but this is good. Plus, it's you, so anything that you write is automatically going to be good. I guess I'm in safe hands. :P
Oh, and I love - justeversolove - how your writing style has changed for this. While I adore the first person style used in Catharsis & Predator, and third person used in Her Ashes & Euphoria, this seems like something a bit... different, but beautiful all the same. I'm amazed that you can write so many different styles seamlessly.
So... I think it's safe to say that I have absolutely no idea what's going on plot-wise yet with this, but I'm sure this is the way you want it. It's wonderful, as usual.
Now I'm off to read the other chapters. I'm so glad you've been posting more here lately!
LIPS
First off, I feel bad that it took me so long to get to read this. I'mreallyreallysorry; it couldn't be helped.
This is quite fascinating so far. I'm really not one for fantasy stories, but this is good. Plus, it's you, so anything that you write is automatically going to be good. I guess I'm in safe hands. :P
Oh, and I love - justeversolove - how your writing style has changed for this. While I adore the first person style used in Catharsis & Predator, and third person used in Her Ashes & Euphoria, this seems like something a bit... different, but beautiful all the same. I'm amazed that you can write so many different styles seamlessly.
So... I think it's safe to say that I have absolutely no idea what's going on plot-wise yet with this, but I'm sure this is the way you want it. It's wonderful, as usual.
Now I'm off to read the other chapters. I'm so glad you've been posting more here lately!
LIPS
9/4/2010 c4 wildcrazychild
Yay! You updated!
But I have to say I'm still kind of clueless about this. LOL. Anyway I think your writing style is amazing so please don't ever stop writing =)
Yay! You updated!
But I have to say I'm still kind of clueless about this. LOL. Anyway I think your writing style is amazing so please don't ever stop writing =)
8/30/2010 c3 wildcrazychild
HEY =)
Great chapter! I can't help but wonder who are those guys.
I hope you'll update soon.
HEY =)
Great chapter! I can't help but wonder who are those guys.
I hope you'll update soon.
8/29/2010 c3 Asian.Gal16
Hi! I love this story! This chapter was very intresting :) The boys really intrigued me, and the ending. Im really curious about what happens next.
Please update soon!
xX
Hi! I love this story! This chapter was very intresting :) The boys really intrigued me, and the ending. Im really curious about what happens next.
Please update soon!
xX
8/27/2010 c3 We Used To Wait
Ooh! Eclipse! That's the name of one of your... something... something... So this Eclipse boii is important, I assume? Eh..
Usually I get bored with tones of descriptiveness but yours is so full of win, it's un-unreadable. Yeah? Like you find the right words to bring out the right sounds.
You know, I really don't want anything bad happening to Timothy... would you really do that to me? Hmm? He dies, right? Ugh. Anyway..
I wish I could say more -bo me- but uni is so intense right now my little brainy can't take much. I'll just go back to plopping plump grapes into my mouth. He.
Oh, there was a typo somewhere in the beginning, but doggone darnit, I can't remember now. Sorry. I'm assuming you're going to revise this anyway, so you'll find it eventually.
Update soon.
love.
peacey.
Ooh! Eclipse! That's the name of one of your... something... something... So this Eclipse boii is important, I assume? Eh..
Usually I get bored with tones of descriptiveness but yours is so full of win, it's un-unreadable. Yeah? Like you find the right words to bring out the right sounds.
You know, I really don't want anything bad happening to Timothy... would you really do that to me? Hmm? He dies, right? Ugh. Anyway..
I wish I could say more -bo me- but uni is so intense right now my little brainy can't take much. I'll just go back to plopping plump grapes into my mouth. He.
Oh, there was a typo somewhere in the beginning, but doggone darnit, I can't remember now. Sorry. I'm assuming you're going to revise this anyway, so you'll find it eventually.
Update soon.
love.
peacey.
6/22/2010 c2 in the city of neon and chrome
i love this story already. its like a trainwreck- you want to look away but you can't. i read the whole of predator and it WAS really confusing, but that was mostly cuz i started reading in the middle of you posting... i hope to follow this story all the way through, though, if you finish it... so, moar, plz? :)
i love this story already. its like a trainwreck- you want to look away but you can't. i read the whole of predator and it WAS really confusing, but that was mostly cuz i started reading in the middle of you posting... i hope to follow this story all the way through, though, if you finish it... so, moar, plz? :)
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