for I want to belong2/13/2022 c68 LilyEvans005
Too many spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. No question has question marks. But nice story I guess.
Too many spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. No question has question marks. But nice story I guess.
10/2/2016 c10 Rooffoo
Anna is an idiot. She should value her job. By not confessing the truth, she is risking her livelihood and more importantly, her niece and nephew's as well. Who the hell cares if by opening up she becomes a snitch? Her niece and nephew should be her priority at this point in time.
Devon and Andrea are horrible but honestly Anna enables them to be rude by not confronting them.
Anna is an idiot. She should value her job. By not confessing the truth, she is risking her livelihood and more importantly, her niece and nephew's as well. Who the hell cares if by opening up she becomes a snitch? Her niece and nephew should be her priority at this point in time.
Devon and Andrea are horrible but honestly Anna enables them to be rude by not confronting them.
1/13/2016 c69 toffeema
Absolutely loved this story. I loved your main character Anna, the fast pace of the story, the sweet romance, and just about everything else. Thank you for sharing this story. I would love to see more from you in the future.
Absolutely loved this story. I loved your main character Anna, the fast pace of the story, the sweet romance, and just about everything else. Thank you for sharing this story. I would love to see more from you in the future.
11/6/2015 c1 aysha
u jst cant believe i loved ur has made an amazing influence on i am too stubborn as you
u jst cant believe i loved ur has made an amazing influence on i am too stubborn as you
11/4/2015 c69 aysha
please write something more...i cant sleep since two days...or jst contact me and tell me the ending.a nice ending...please!
please write something more...i cant sleep since two days...or jst contact me and tell me the ending.a nice ending...please!
10/24/2015 c1 Fizza
I read this book a long time ago and loved it. Then I forgot its name and I kept searching for it and I tried really hard to remember its name but I couldn't which made me quite sad as I wanted to read it again. Yesterday, I was going through my old diary and there was a page with "I want to belong" written on top of it. I instantly remembered the name and opened my laptop to search it up and I finally found the story. I'm reading this again and I have to say that this is one of the best books I have read here. I absolutely adore the characters, particularly Devon. I don't know if you'll read this or not but I just wanna say that you're a brilliant writer. Good job! :)
I read this book a long time ago and loved it. Then I forgot its name and I kept searching for it and I tried really hard to remember its name but I couldn't which made me quite sad as I wanted to read it again. Yesterday, I was going through my old diary and there was a page with "I want to belong" written on top of it. I instantly remembered the name and opened my laptop to search it up and I finally found the story. I'm reading this again and I have to say that this is one of the best books I have read here. I absolutely adore the characters, particularly Devon. I don't know if you'll read this or not but I just wanna say that you're a brilliant writer. Good job! :)
9/2/2015 c68 annayh44
Amazing amazing amazing amazinggggggg this fairytale was damn good than other disney fairtale hehe I will tell you i didnt felt even sec not bored and the way the each chapter was. .actually i only focus on leads character but its hard i like other character but i love all the characters here. Devon he is hahaha..the way he said Annna he cant go untill she said him yes for Jeee Most amazing way of proposing a girl xDDD I love Anna. .Anna you know what you are most beautiful Lady and character. .I usually like male character but I love you Anna . .I didnt like Devon first but as he start to know him i like too but I love Anna (already three times haha) Great Job~~ I want to say more but i dont know how to. .anyways at end I will miss you all the characters. .this story end but will always remain in my heart !
Amazing amazing amazing amazinggggggg this fairytale was damn good than other disney fairtale hehe I will tell you i didnt felt even sec not bored and the way the each chapter was. .actually i only focus on leads character but its hard i like other character but i love all the characters here. Devon he is hahaha..the way he said Annna he cant go untill she said him yes for Jeee Most amazing way of proposing a girl xDDD I love Anna. .Anna you know what you are most beautiful Lady and character. .I usually like male character but I love you Anna . .I didnt like Devon first but as he start to know him i like too but I love Anna (already three times haha) Great Job~~ I want to say more but i dont know how to. .anyways at end I will miss you all the characters. .this story end but will always remain in my heart !
7/26/2015 c48 Alyssa
When you say Devon is in the apartment it is the best cliff hanger I've ever read! How can you not like the cliff hanger? Plus, don't worry about what people think about cliff hangers. This is a great story and you shouldn't be worried that people might hate it.
When you say Devon is in the apartment it is the best cliff hanger I've ever read! How can you not like the cliff hanger? Plus, don't worry about what people think about cliff hangers. This is a great story and you shouldn't be worried that people might hate it.
6/27/2014 c69 Elle
Please write another, but with Michael and Lizzy. :)
Please write another, but with Michael and Lizzy. :)
4/15/2014 c69 VioletL
Really loved it... Read it all in one go! I liked all the characters very much ..
Really loved it... Read it all in one go! I liked all the characters very much ..
3/8/2014 c2 Garson
Oh my God! Your story is amazing! It's everything i've been loking for :) I love characters like anna who's shy and not agressive. It makes her so graceful in my opinion. Even when Devon insults her, she keeps silent, and not saying mean words back, that makes her so wise! I actually cried at some parts of the story x)
Good job! You should make more stories similar to this one! :))
Oh my God! Your story is amazing! It's everything i've been loking for :) I love characters like anna who's shy and not agressive. It makes her so graceful in my opinion. Even when Devon insults her, she keeps silent, and not saying mean words back, that makes her so wise! I actually cried at some parts of the story x)
Good job! You should make more stories similar to this one! :))
10/14/2013 c10 Yewah
I WOULD KICK HIM WERE IT HURTS MOST
I WOULD KICK HIM WERE IT HURTS MOST
9/24/2013 c68 Guest
I read it all in one go omggg this is great I love it! Its 3am now and I have to wake up in 3 hours for school but this was totally worth it! Good job!
I read it all in one go omggg this is great I love it! Its 3am now and I have to wake up in 3 hours for school but this was totally worth it! Good job!
8/4/2013 c69 Guest
this was amazing.
this was amazing.